Banner Critique?
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nayannp
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I was very confused by the title at the top. THETA EDUCATION looks like THETAEDUCATION or THETA E DUCATION.
but apart from that looks good!
yeah thanks for bringing it in my notice and for the critique
klique
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You took the words out of my mouth. Other than that issue with the letters being jumbled, it looks fine. Nice job.I was very confused by the title at the top. THETA EDUCATION looks like THETAEDUCATION or THETA E DUCATION.
but apart from that looks good!
nayannp
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No it is written in hindi
And yes it is for better future of poor girls who are not getting right eduction
- Nov 16, 2011
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It is good, color selection could have been better.Also, ask your client to correct mistakes on homepage. Like it should be "Limited seats available" instead of "limited seat available" .
nayannp
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Well yeah i will be surely trying more on the logo,But the website its under his control and i am not the designer or developer for it so no comments
kveldulv
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Reducing the amount of visual complexity would really improve this banner.
It's good, but a bit busy, IE, the eye isn't drawn to any particular spot.
Some suggestions
- make the background darker, so that the bars with text in them stand out more.
- put a smaller, compact version of your contact details up the top too.
It's good, but a bit busy, IE, the eye isn't drawn to any particular spot.
Some suggestions
- make the background darker, so that the bars with text in them stand out more.
- put a smaller, compact version of your contact details up the top too.
Visual Eagle
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Use black on yellow backgrounds I mean cmon that white is killing my eyes when looking at that bright yellow Better colors could have been used for easier reading if you ask me.
Better colors could have been used for easier reading if you ask me.
nayannp
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thanks for you priceless review i would like to know where exact in the top can the details be putted??
thanks man for the suggestions i am sure this will look great with your suggestionsUse black on yellow backgrounds I mean cmon that white is killing my eyes when looking at that bright yellow
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nayannp
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Thank you so much for helping me making this better buddy.
DrDuran
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oh sorry knew it was hindi but thought that was the written script
don't you think they would be interested in the other courses just seems a bit sexist thats all,
Calvin Flux
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There is a fair bit going on, yet I think the biggest thing is the title. Apart from that, it does its job!