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I am a noob . I am trying to make some money off AC so i can use it to fund other online business models. Okay, at first, I conceived AC to be easy and just picked up 4 articles from an article directory and rewrote them. I donot have money to pay freelancers. I am not a good writer but I tried to rewrite them as best and uniquely as I could. However, just two days after I had submitted my articls( rewrites), I logged in, and to my utter disappointment I saw that all of them had been "Editor declined". I thought AC took at least a week to review articles. How come they denied my mine so quickly.????Does anyone know if AC automatically checks the articles first fro something and if they pass it, then they move on to actualhuman review??? And all of them had this reason for being rejected..

" Thank you for your submission. Ac is buidling a library of.............content bla bla...unfortunately this submission doesnt differ in topic or breadth from existing content to qualify.....bla bla"

Alright, so now what is that supposed to mean? and how do i get around it? what type of articles do "differ in breadth etc etc"???


Btw, I am also copy pasting articles I submitted so that you guys can know exactly what i submitted and please point out any mistakes, I would be really graetful for any help.

Ways to Appear Stylish When Playing Outdoors

A lot of sporting activities are done outdoors. Since a lot of people visit such events it feels good to look fashionable as much as it does to win in the event itself. Regardless of whether you are looking to take part in sporting events or simply want to look trendy and sporty, a wide number of choices are available for you to be able to appear stylish when playing outdoors and otherwise.

Surfing, hiking, rock climbing and fishing etc are among the favorite activities of many. There is an exhaustive number of clothing accessories available pertaining to these activities. A number of different wetsuits, short boards and swimwear choices are available for both men and women that will make you stand out in a crowd by enthralling them with your sporting performances and stylish clothing.

If you are engaged in rock climbing activities, be it a genuine mountain side or just a wall, there are a number of means you can use to make your self appear fashionable in shells, insulation, trekking shorts, trekking shirts and climbing jackets. It is vital to select durable and long lasting clothing in order to make sure you have the most suitable clothing for that particular sport. To wear trendy looking sports wear gives off your desire to appear stylish at all times and also shows that you take care to look nicely dressed.

It is important to wear the appropriate outfit for the activity you are indulging in so that you keep your self safe from any sort of accident or injury. Often, inappropriate clothing can cause harm not only to you but others too. Luckily, a wide range of sports wear is available that not only keeps you safe but also makes you look fashionable while playing.

No matter what sporting activity you are looking to indulge in, whether it's skiing or surfing the type of clothes you wear is very important. Educate yourself on various clothing manufacturers that provide trendy sports wear. Most likely, you will love the combination of looking fashionable and doing well in the sports, with the right outfit.

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Having enjoyable Themes for your children's' parties


Perhaps you don't find many of the traditional and part themes not enjoyable any more and want to make it more interesting. It is possible by being creative and it will make all the kids absolutely delighted. You shouldn't hesitate in trying out something new because children like special parties and they will love you a lot for it.

For starters, you would have to make up your mind on what theme to select. This should not be very hard. Perhaps, if your kid is fascinated with pirates you could make pirates as your theme. Once you have decided upon the theme, then you have to work on the specifics. For instance you could hold a contest for the best Jack Sparrow. If not, then just ask your invitees to dress as their favorite pirate and then hand out a gift to the one with the best outfit.

You can make your invite cards out of parchment paper and also have them delivered in little boxes that look like small treasure chests. If you want to give your party invite some more special pirate touches, you can also draw the directions to your home such that it resembles a treasure map.

You can have some pirate music being played when your party guests are arriving at your house. You can adorn your house with red, gold and black colored balloons. You can even make up names for your dishes for instance spy ships or hidden treasure cookies.

To arrange a dress up party is an excellent way of enjoying a pirated based theme. Tell all your guests to dress up like their favorite pirate and then you can provide certain accessories like eye patches, bandanas at your house, which your guests can chose from.

Another thing you can do is to arrange a pirate creation contest. Provide children some miniature pirate figures made out of cardboard paper and certain accessories like glue, feathers and buttons and let them create a pirate by themselves. Give the children rewards for their creations.

You can also have a treasure hunt sort of an activity out in the yard. Hide candies or things like that for treasure. Give clues and also place extra clues that have to be discovered first before finally getting to the actual treasure.

Just using your imagination will let you come up with many interesting and fun ways to add a unique touch to your dress party. Use your creativity. If you enjoy the activities with your guests and maintain humor, and give the guests a great time your party is going to be one to remember by many of your guests.

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Thanks man, that cleared a few things up. Also, I guess It would be ungrateful to ask one more dumb question when you already have given a lot of useful info to work with.

My question : where to find articles from, if not article directories, I am not asking someone to give up their source, obviously. but if you think you can give some tips on where to find them and also if you dont want to make it public then you can pm me as well. I would appreciate that.

I just read your first article, Ways to Appear Stylish When Playing Outdoors.

Here's why the slammed you:

The title is good, which is important. You want a good title, and it definitely made me want to read the entire article. (I'm an outdoor enthusiast)

However, I was personally bummed to see that you did not actually tell me a SINGLE thing about how to look stylish while being in the outdoors. You talk about it being important, but you don't tell me what to look for, how to do it, and most importantly, you don't actually suggest any "Ways to Appear Stylish When Playing Outdoors".

Your article is pure fluff, and AC just saw through it. This is why you got the, "not enough breadth in content" denial.

Extremely Disappointed -- to say it very mildly!

As Danny rightly said, your first article had absolutely no 'article' in it. Sorry, but as a good critic would do, I would suggest you to make your title a starting point and the ending should make people wonder why it (the article) wasn't a bit lengthier.

The title was/is really appetizing but your opening para just left a bad taste in the mouth. To tell you the truth... as your readers would no doubt do, I too walked out of this thread -- literally. Didn't even saw there was another piece below it. So think of what the editor would think... these type of articles would compel him to throw up his hands in despair and curse himself for coming to the office.

Sorry again for being so critical, but there lies your answer to why an article fails miserably.

The title was like the take-off of a 100-meter champ... who, in over-excitement, had forgotten to tie his shoe-laces!

Due to a good title, your article literally took off like space-shuttle... without sufficient fuel in its belly...

So see to it that your title takes your readers on an exotic voyage that they had never dreamed of, and at the end they would be left much satisfied, and also would want you to take them to another world yet again!

Better luck next time!

A few things to add to the already great input...

First, you never want to post your exact articles (whether rejected or not) here at BHW. I would edit your post and take them down lucias. AC staff and AC's forum members watch over BHW religiously, you actually gave them all they need to have your account/accounts banned.

Also, while your titles are attention grabbing, they aren't using keywords. Every article submitted to AC should be based on a specific keyword/keyword phrase. The same goes for the article bodies themselves.