This seems like someone in elementary school trying to fill a word quota for a class paper. Its awful and unusable in my eyes. Maybe if I didnt speak any english it would be acceptable, but I do. Ideas jump around from sentence sentence, extraneous words and lack of pronouns make this almost impossible to read. I am new, I will admit that. But I have 12 pages of this garbage to fix. Can anyone point me to a service that produces output that looks like an average person wrote it?