ai generated stories feedback required

I made these horror stories in chatgpt for my youtube channel but i'm going to do longer versions of these for youtube channel.
But these are just short examples i've uploaded them as documents instead of pasting the text here, because its too long.

I want some honest feedback on them on what you think about and what exactly i can do to improve on them, in anyway and if these are good enough for youtube.
Again i will be doing longer versions of these for my youtube these are examples.

I guess they are different stories, I waited for the review of the mysterious caller.

Quite interesting stories, i like the first one, nice hook, and good for a minecraft video on tiktok.

Read the beginning of the first one. Sorry, the writing is just too "flowery." Every story should start with a punch to hook the reader straight away. It should be to the point. Clean sentences. Chat GPT tends to be too flowery in its writing. You'll have to do some serious editing to knock it into shape. Just my opinion (although I do have 30+ years of experience writing books, articles, content for the web, etc).