Affiliates, Do These 1-Hour VSLs From Producers Really Work?

I've been trying to enter this market for a while now. My pages are getting over 1,000 clicks on the VSL (after the press release) and no clicks to the product form.

I'm thinking about creating my own structure, a 7/15 minute VSL.

What's your opinion on this?



My Creatives has over 40% retention, I think this is already progress, but it's tough, I'm not 100% sure that the problem is a 1-hour VSL.