Ouch, the red hurts my eyes. Your message windows come and go to fast and the music is not very inviting. Go with something more simple, just a basic landing page to start out with. Then work your way into a flash set up.
I'm no expert, but the music was annoying, text was too slow and it was unnecessary to be in so many partitions, the fonts were bad, and the skip button didnt work =P
Download one of the Flash 8 templates from Template Monster and edit it. It will be professionally designed and you won't have to worry about aesthetics, just content.
I hope you do not post this for traffic. you are a long way to go buddy. Hopefully, this is your first site, otherwise you should consider another job.
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