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10$ a day with shopify + FB ads (NEED HELP ON STORE)

Discussion in 'My Journey Discussions' started by itsboneyfish, Mar 29, 2017.

  1. itsboneyfish

    itsboneyfish Registered Member

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    Hello BHW!

    i have started a dropshipping store and tomorrow im gonna buy ads for it.
    I will update tomorrow!

    STORE: https://dealonstore.com/
    PLEASE TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE MY STORE!
     
  2. osberht

    osberht Registered Member

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    Shitty lobster logo. Sorry.
     
  3. Mr Vlad

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    Okay it seems like the very first sentence has a mistake "What a free fidget spinner?"
    I guess you meant "Want a free fidget spinner?"

    Next, I always ask myself the question, when my visitors get on the site will they understand what it offers in less than 5-7 seconds...? If the answer is no, I work on it until it is a definite yes.

    Your homepage is a collection of random products with no purpose. Totally different categories. I get the idea that it's 'deals', and you are likely to convert from ads promoting direct products, but to keep the customer on the site and shop for more, that would be challenging - since all products are random. You need to cross sell similar products from the same collection.

    Also I would recommend removing the icons from your menu. It's my personal preference, but I just think it makes the store look a bit cheaper. Maybe just leave it for the search button.

    Good luck!
     
  4. Naroha

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    kinda hyped to watch this :)
     
  5. Defeatenonce

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    I dont understand why does it say free?
     
  6. Mr Vlad

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    to get fast sales.. the items cost less than $1 so he offers them free and makes money from shipping instead..
     
  7. Defeatenonce

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    but it says 9,99 XD thats far from free.
     
  8. Mr Vlad

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    As I understood on his site you have to use a coupon to get it for free.

    I'd rather create a free section and price them at a 100% discounted rate $0.00
    But then you need a few tricks added so that people can't abuse it.
     
    Last edited: Mar 29, 2017