My "3 Week diet" landing page question

[Axelivan17]

Is this landing page good enough to get sells. I currently just started sending targeted traffic with Bing Ads. Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated. It is my first landing page ever. Would I be okay to send traffic to it is my question.

3-weekdietplan.com/3weekdiet < ---View my landing page for my 3 week diet offer

 

[Hawkster]

Any results yet with bing ads?

 

[Axelivan17]

Any results yet with bing ads?

Not yet, i just started it like 2 hours ago. I was direct-linking it and said f that. So I created the landing page. My question is to experienced affiliates who can look at my landing page and say whether or not is good enough to send traffic. But I will let everybody know after my first sell with "3 week diet".

 

[evilclown]

Not bad, but it needs work. Call of action is not prominent, cloak those affiliate links, video sells better than text, so i would move the video to the top. Many many things!

Sometimes too much is not good. Make your message simpler, direct, motivate to take action now!

If you buying traffic and not tracking you doing it wrong and wasting money. Get those links cloaked, add your tracking pixel. And don't do broad keywords, find very specific keywords that have people on the buying stage.

Good luck with sales.

Read this:

http://www.seoclarity.net/map-keywords-different-stages-audiences-buying-cycle-14971/

 

[Axelivan17]

Not bad, but it needs work. Call of action is not prominent, cloak those affiliate links, video sells better than text, so i would move the video to the top. Many many things!

Sometimes too much is not good. Make your message simpler, direct, motivate to take action now!

If you buying traffic and not tracking you doing it wrong and wasting money. Get those links cloaked, add your tracking pixel. And don't do broad keywords, find very specific keywords that have people on the buying stage.

Good luck with sales.

Read this:

http://www.seoclarity.net/map-keywords-different-stages-audiences-buying-cycle-14971/

Now, that's more like it . I have very targeted keywords. all three "phrase" "exact" "broad". My broad is okay because i got negative keywords already set to block none wanted searches/clicks. Yes I will move the video higher tomorrow. Thank you

 

[davids355]

On mobile it doesn't display that well. There are lots of big gaps. And the text is too small and yes, I agree with above that the call to actions are too small.

All the stuff is there though, just needs some tweaks.

 

[seoheroo]

Test it out and see how it goes.
If you go to your homepage it's a wordpress site default page. You should get a redirect wordpress plugin and make all url go to your 3 week plan.
Good luck to you!

 

[Axelivan17]

On mobile it doesn't display that well. There are lots of big gaps. And the text is too small and yes, I agree with above that the call to actions are too small.

All the stuff is there though, just needs some tweaks.

I took mobile out. I don't want any mobile devices for the following reason. Desktop devices are more likely to buy period.

 

[Axelivan17]

Test it out and see how it goes.
If you go to your homepage it's a wordpress site default page. You should get a redirect wordpress plugin and make all url go to your 3 week plan.
Good luck to you!

Awe Yes I was wondering how. Thank you all changes will be applied tomorrow 1/4/17 after my stats exam lol busy kid

 

[bambi]

2 things:

1. It's not loading properly on mobile, at least not for me. You should test it on a couple different mobile devices. There are huge gaps of either missing images or maybe the page is just not formatted right for mobile. Not sure which because I do see some images.

2. It's WAY too long for a landing page. Let the vendor do the selling. All you need to do is pique the interest of the visitor. Reduce the length so there is minimal scrolling. And have a clear call-to-action above the fold on mobile and desktop.

Good luck!

 

[evilclown]

I took mobile out. I don't want any mobile devices for the following reason. Desktop devices are more likely to buy period.

That's a false statement. If you actually look at stats, more purchase are done from phones than from desktops. Lets say the fat girl at work finds your site, but she does not want people in the office see her buying the product, so she turns to her phone which is private. You just lost a sale.

 

[Axelivan17]

2 things:

1. It's not loading properly on mobile, at least not for me. You should test it on a couple different mobile devices. There are huge gaps of either missing images or maybe the page is just not formatted right for mobile. Not sure which because I do see some images.

2. It's WAY too long for a landing page. Let the vendor do the selling. All you need to do is pique the interest of the visitor. Reduce the length so there is minimal scrolling. And have a clear call-to-action above the fold on mobile and desktop.

Good luck!

Traffic will not be send to mobile. So I didn't even try to make it work for mobile devices. Thanks for replying good call though

 

[Axelivan17]

That's a false statement. If you actually look at stats, more purchase are done from phones than from desktops. Lets say the fat girl at work finds your site, but she does not want people in the office see her buying the product, so she turns to her phone which is private. You just lost a sale.

Brah I had that in mind ahah. But I will optimize for desktop for now

 

[evilclown]

2. It's WAY too long for a landing page. Let the vendor do the selling. All you need to do is pique the interest of the visitor. Reduce the length so there is minimal scrolling. And have a clear call-to-action above the fold on mobile and desktop.

Good luck!

Not true. You can make a long landing page if the sales copy is right. You never let the vendor do all the selling. Prime your visitors, push the sale.

 

[Axelivan17]

Not true. You can make a long landing page if the sales copy is right. You never let the vendor do all the selling. Prime your visitors, push the sale.

Yes, That's exactly what I wanted to do. Educate/review then the the client is ready to see the offer and not be surprised by a typical selling page. I even have the offer to be opened in a different tap. I have the $7 dollars and $20 re-bill on my page. Most people don't like exit pop ups. Looks more realistic if I have the discount in my page. idk that's my opinion. I will revise my landing page soon.

My ad title goes like this "Lose 12-23 lbs - Only $27" not $47 so the client will go my to my site and click on the discount. I will make the call to action better

 

[dabandit]

If I were you, I'd setup a survey to collect info on the reason why the prospect wants to lose weight. Take the top 3 to 5 answers and turn them into mini-niches. I'd tailor an individual lander around each mini-niche. Split test a short vs a long letter (several CTA spread throught - top, middle, bottom. However, I wouldn't do it for the purpose of selling but collecting leads. Nurture the leads over time and then hit them with the sale when they are ready.

Also, site rendering time, mobile responsiveness and spellings affects your quality score. You're failing at all three.

 

[BackY]

I took mobile out. I don't want any mobile devices for the following reason. Desktop devices are more likely to buy period.

I believe ur wrong about that mate. Check ur analytics, ur gonna get 70% of ur visitors from mobile. That's the case for me for the last 4-5years or most of my websites.

 

[Axelivan17]

If I were you, I'd setup a survey to collect info on the reason why the prospect wants to lose weight. Take the top 3 to 5 answers and turn them into mini-niches. I'd tailor an individual lander around each mini-niche. Split test a short vs a long letter (several CTA spread throught - top, middle, bottom. However, I wouldn't do it for the purpose of selling but collecting leads. Nurture the leads over time and then hit them with the sale when they are ready.

I am a new affiliate it is best to make sells and not collect leads just yet. I want to make at-least 2 sells a day then I will scale and move to other and better strategy. I started 12/26/16 and made my first two sells with diabetes destroyer with software project. I know that I can make 3 week diet work. Diabetes cost per click is to expensive for me right now. Diet is easier thus I will work hard to make sells for the 3 week diet I promise everybody that. #dedicated

 

[Axelivan17]

I believe ur wrong about that mate. Check ur analytics, ur gonna get 70% of ur visitors from mobile. That's the case for me for the last 4-5years or most of my websites.

Does the 3 week diet work for mobile better than desktop. proof to me that one. But yes you right

 

[Axelivan17]

If I were you, I'd setup a survey to collect info on the reason why the prospect wants to lose weight. Take the top 3 to 5 answers and turn them into mini-niches. I'd tailor an individual lander around each mini-niche. Split test a short vs a long letter (several CTA spread throught - top, middle, bottom. However, I wouldn't do it for the purpose of selling but collecting leads. Nurture the leads over time and then hit them with the sale when they are ready.

Also, site rendering time, mobile responsiveness and spellings affects your quality score. You're failing at all three.

ahah yea I will look into it. Campaign is paused.