HELP: Calling All BHW Experts!

[c00ki3b0y]

Hello BHW,

I created a website a few weeks back where I giveaway high-end prizes.

I have set up an entry page where you enter your details into a form but the page is under a content locker which forces a user to complete a survey in order to proceed to the entry form.

So far no one as completed a survey and I haven't seen a penny. I think my website looks good but as always you will be blinded by your own creation.

So I am looking for people here to have a browse around my website and give me any pointers on how to improve or maybe a reason why surveys aren't being completed and I'm not seeing any money.

I am a newbie when it comes to CPA and online money making.

urbangiveaway_dot_c o m

 

[sjoerdtop]

i'm pretty sure there are some free raffle cpa scripts out there that look a lot better than your website.

i sugest you have a look at that.

Also adding a comment section with positive comments can really give you a boost

 

[Aty]

Your website is a big failure, from every possible point of view.

 

[MakavelliD]

Where do you get the traffic from? ANd how much traffic? I never get involved in this type of CPA offer much because I see them as spammy myself.
And I say that the conversion rate would naturally be very low.
To take a complete wild guess, maybe you need 100,000 targeted people on your website, who want to enter..... then less than 200 will fill in the cpa offer.

 

[c00ki3b0y]

Your website is a big failure, from every possible point of view.

This is a fine example of a troll! Why bother replying to this thread if you are just going to write something derogatory like that.?

Oops I forgot, it's another chance to push your spammy signature marketplace offers that don't work.

 

[mickyfu]

This is a fine example of a troll! Why bother replying to this thread if you are just going to write something derogatory like that.?

Oops I forgot, it's another chance to push your spammy signature marketplace offers that don't work.

Why ask for an opinion then attack people who give an opinion that you don't like?

Your problem is these days, people don't fall for this kind of crap, so you need seriously high targeted traffic. I'm not having a go, it is simply the truth.

 

[c00ki3b0y]

No I appreciate constructive criticism but that felt like he was flaming me for no reason. Basically it's rubbish and that's the end of it with no reason given.

What is the best CPA methods at current then?

 

[lucasbraydon]

Wow Impressive! I am actually really shocked OP well done!
What a load of utter shit!

 

[iulipwnz]

If you have targeted traffic is impossible to not make any money.Also, find something else for giveaway, because some people pay to complete the surveys.I dont think anyone would pay just to have a chance at winning something.At least I wouldn't

 

[elfgirl]

You could definitely improve your site. For example your background image is too blurry which makes your site seem very unprofessional. The banner is also very cheesy, meaning that it looks like you used a Word Art font and some clip art to make it. I would invest in a better banner and maybe a more responsive Wordpress layout.

 

[peetrike]

Wow, no wonder why u haven`t made any money with it. First of all your design sucks, shitty CTA (it took so long even for me to find the "entry"), no proofs and content locker appears in wrong time. Basically you have done everything not to get conversions.

Cheers

 

[Vox0ut]

Everyone sees that that site is not making you enough money to give away these prices so its obvious fake.

 

[Wilson Grant Fisk]

The site is terrible, it looks fake, also it took me several minutes to find how to enter the competition:

You need a better Call To Action

 

[shifty303]

Whatever survey provider you're using is blocked by BitDefender. I get a big "PAGE NOT SAFE" "BIT DEFENDER ANTI-MALWARE BLOCKED THIS PAGE"

 

[c00ki3b0y]

What direction do you think I should go in?

scrap the site and try a new CPA method or rework the design?

 

[peetrike]

What direction do you think I should go in?

scrap the site and try a new CPA method or rework the design?

Try new CPA method!

Cheers

 

[L33T]

The site is terrible, it looks fake, also it took me several minutes to find how to enter the competition:

You need a better Call To Action

Thanks for saving my time lol...

 

[strawhat150]

You should work on your design that's for sure.

 

[voljin]

Your website is a big failure, from every possible point of view.

Wow Impressive! I am actually really shocked OP well done!
What a load of utter shit!

That's the real truth OP. With it's current state, your site will not going to make it. More over, people nowadays won't bite this kind of "free iphone/ps4/etc" like they used to be. It's getting hard and saturated.

I would suggest you to choose another niche. But if you still want to go with it, here is some suggestion:

* make your site looks professional, trusted and convincing
* work on your wording
* work on CTA and design
* add social proof, fake one (ahem) will do . Here is a hint:

http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/f200-social-media/

* get some review/ testimonial. there is plenty of it on fiverr at $5 each

and lastly, find 10 successfull similar site. Those that convince you so much you couldn't resist to enter their "giveaway". Copy, adapt, apply it to your site.

Wish you all the best

 

[Paper-Boy]

@OP, the best way to make a landing page is to copy what your competitors are doing and improve on it.