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hi do you have samples of original article and the rewritten one ? I want to see how unique it will be
 
Placed order for an article for 1500-1600. Payment sent Tras ID 14........662G.
 
Just placed my order - cant wait to see the results. I will write a honest review here.
 
Let me know when i get my article its over 3 days and you are not replying emails as well.
 
MuzzyA said:
This is an honest review.

I have received 5/6 articles I ordered. 2 Original (1 received so far) and 4 rewrites. For me this has been a complete waste of money - (even if it wasn't very much). The example I was sent before ordering made sense and was grammatically acceptable. The articles I received however were illegible. If you would like a copy of any of these articles / all of them PM me for a true reflection of this service and not a cherry-picked example.

As per the previous comment by bdang727 - If you want articles that pass copyscape for backlinking (or massive distribution for SEO etc) - these types of articles may be fine for you but if you want them to be read by actual human beings - maybe not. I disagree with the articles being "very readable" - or at least in regards to the ones I have. The English is very poor, i.e. it's broken and doesn't make any sense in large portions of the article. Sentences are completely out of context and assembled as if by a child with a thesaurus. Even the re-written articles are very poor - if not worse. You would think spinning an article and rewriting it in a way that makes sense would be an easy task but clearly whoever worked on my articles couldn't have cared less if they made sense or not. The priority here was apparently to get through the rewrite as fast as possible.

For example, here is a RANDOM line of text I have taken from a re-written article about Social Media Marketing:

"Those who are bankers might require having subscription to Financial Times as well as their bank would pay probably for that subscription hence once it is all set, they'll forget that probably you are paying even for it. For the bank, cost is so low that no one actually cared about their expense."

-I have no idea what this is supposed to say / mean and how it correlates with the original article that was supposed to be re-written. Oh, and the other 450 words are all pretty much the same.

Another example from an "original" article below. The brief was to write an article about Social Media Strategy and Measuring ROI:

"The agency is an honest torch bearer in the profession to bring out strategy for enlistment of business goals, products and their shining features. Emphasis is given to highlight the products why are they superior to others and why should they be given priority in mass consumption."

- The entire 500 word article is gibberish which vaguely sounds like a sales pitch for a marketing agency by someone very stoned. It is literally the same paragraph repeated several times in increasingly poor English.

Once again - I have nothing against Ankur - or this service. I just don't think I will be using it for blog articles since I want articles that actually make sense if you read them(decent content).

I would however like some of whatever being smoked while these articles are written. :detective

Peace ;)
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Ankur, How can you have a review like this on your thread and not address the issues presented? Muzzy must be lying his A$$ off or your service is a complete scam. Can you help me/us understand?
 
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