Comment on my Press Release?

[homme143]

Hey guys-

Could you guys pls check out my press release below and tell me what you think?
Opinions, ideas, suggestions, etc would so be appreciated!

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FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE: April 2014



CliqueOut!
by Emil Antoan
The Psychologie Playhouse
[email protected]
www.Cliqueout.com


CliqueOut ? Get out and join a group.
Making social connections in groups; no stress, no membership.


Singapore: The Psychologie Playhouse jumps into social media and network with the launch of a website based on spontaneous group outings and both casual and official group events.
CliqueOut.com allows registered users to open invites to other users without the need for membership to any groups, clubs, societies or organizations. CliqueOut is available in major cities around the world.

Non-virtual social skills must not be forgotten and, ?CliqueOut comes at a time where people need to create real-life human interactions, minus the full-on commitment that other platforms require and without that awkwardness that comes with a one to one person meet?, said CliqueOut founder and entrepreneur, Emil Antoan.

CliqueOut invites anyone who are 16 years old and above to widen their social circles by sharing activities and experiences in numbers, with benefits including;

• Enhanced social skills and confidence in a group setting
• Safety in numbers when individuals meet in groups
• Opportunities for anyone to quickly get social through preferred activities but without full-time commitment or official registration to become members of the group

People from all walks of life, situations or background would benefit with CliqueOut. You could be a group of music geeks looking to form a band, or a business traveler looking for last minute drinking buddies, maybe even a new neighbor looking to meet locals; there would be social opportunities to meet your needs and wants. In addition; the CliqueOut simple group chat connects users instantly. It all begins at CliqueOut.com.

About Emil Antoan / The Psychologie Playhouse
Emil Antoan is a young entrepreneur, educator and business developer specializing in the field of education, online social networks and social events on a global reach. Emil is the founder of The Psychologie and The Psychologie Playhouse; a registered and trusted brand that provides educational and social experiences to both children and adults through open community platforms, programs and events.

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Reaching Emil and The Psychologie Playhouse is easy through email at [email protected] or CliqueOut.com

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Thanks in advance to contributors!

 

[Wilson Grant Fisk]

What does this have to do with the BHW conference?

 

[homme143]

Oops - sorry, i thought i clicked on Lounge (which appears above this conference). Cheers!

 

[Wilson Grant Fisk]

Oops - sorry, i thought i clicked on Lounge (which appears above this conference). Cheers!

No, problem. Just ask a Mod to move it.

 

[sienna]

Press release is not an overt advertising.
It must be a news article and not a marketing/advertising/promotion article.
Check PRWeb for samples.

 

[homme143]

Hi Sienna, Thanks! Will look at that.
WI30SN - where/how do i find a mod?

 

[Deleted member 658642]

Hi Sienna, Thanks! Will look at that.
WI30SN - where/how do i find a mod?

Just hit the report post button in your original post and ask them to move it.

 

[BHW-News]

(Moved to lounge)

 

[nightbird]

homme143,

I really enjoyed reading this press release..and I think this is a service that is badly needed. Too many of us spend countless hours stuck in front of a computer screen not interacting with anyone..that when we do venture out into the "real world"..it is very easy to forget our social graces and how to interact with other human beings without having to type to speak to them on a keyboard. I think this is why so many people are now preferring to have "texting" friendships/relationships..rather than pickup a phone and talk to someone..or meet them in person..which I find really sad and depressing.

So keep up the great work..and I hope this group is a success for you my friend.

 

[Wilson Grant Fisk]

homme143,

I really enjoyed reading this press release..and I think this is a service that is badly needed. Too many of us spend countless hours stuck in front of a computer screen not interacting with anyone..that when we do venture out into the "real world"..it is very easy to forget our social graces and how to interact with other human beings without having to type to speak to them on a keyboard. I think this is why so many people are now preferring to have "texting" friendships/relationships..rather than pickup a phone and talk to someone..or meet them in person..which I find really sad and depressing.

So keep up the great work..and I hope this group is a success for you my friend.

Are you a Bot?
I only ask because it seems you spent 2 days posting "Welcome and good luck to you! " in numerous threads.
Nice aged account with zero posts.

OP, your PR isn't terrible but it is probably worthwhile asking the advice of a Professional, there are several PR services in The Marketplace.
If you order the service from netmoney1, I am sure he will help you improve it. Good luck.