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I recently bought a couple articles and was really impressed with the quality. I've hired a few other people from Fiverr and some other services, and it always felt like they were trying to pad the word count, or there were lots of little typos. Honestly, these are the best articles I've bought so far and I'll definitely be buying more in the future.
 
Free Review Copy Review:

As agreed, I would do a review on the content that anuj sent, so that is what I will review. At the end I have attached the article below for your own review. Please note I did not ask for any corrections, this is just based on what I got right off. Therefore, I am sure they would have corrected these if I had asked. At the same time, as I would recommend with any service, always do a test run before you jump in with both feet. This is not a way to slight Anuj, but what I have found to always create the best experience.

Review:
Spelling: Good - no mistakes present,
Grammar: Had 5 mistakes I saw.
Plagiarism: None found on standard sites, copyscape, plagium, etc.
Structure: Did not always provide good transitions between sentences, but overall it flowed well.
Content: I would say it could have added more substance and missed opportunities to really inform users, but in a elementary way it provided an understanding on how to write a press release.
Other: Flesch Reading Ease shows this at a 9th grade reading level.

Overall, a nice piece of content, that I might use for second tier backlinks. In terms of price, I think it is fairly close to the value given.

You should judge yourself, here is the content... I did not use this content so it is also up for grabs:

Learning how to write a press release is one of the most valuable publicity tools that you can use to promote your company. Journalists of all types like a well written press release because they are informative, short, and fill up space. In short, it makes their job easier, lightens their work load and reduces the space they have to fill by adding interesting content for their readers.

Since you want your press release to be read and published it needs an attention-grabbing headline. In fact, "attention grabbing" are the operative words when learning how to write a press release. The most important keywords should be the first three in the headline, such as "Energy Costs Increase Sharply in First Quarter" or "Self Help Courses in Demand in Middle America".

It is important to keep sentences and paragraphs short and concise so that the press release is quick and easy to read. Your goal is not so much to educate as to create interest in your subject so that the reader will want to learn more. Avoid run-on sentences and stick to the facts. Your readers will want to read opinions and you must generate enough interest for them to go after that information on their own.

The most effective technique when learning how to write a press release is to stick to the 5 W's: who, what, when, where, and why. For example:

Bordeaux Investments Brokers Optimistic for Second Quarter

Jay Norris, spokesman for Wine, Inc., says the company expects stocks to soar higher in the second quarter according to their Paris branch that has just finished the annual report on crop conditions in the Bordeaux region.

As you can see, anyone interested in the subject of Bordeaux wine investments will be grabbed by the headline and have the essential facts in less than 30 seconds. They are likely to read the entire press release and continue to the company's site, which you will insert at the end of the press release.

It is standard practice to end the press release with three hash marks like so: ### centered beneath the last line of the release. Under these you should offer concise facts about the company, contact information and a link to their website.

Now that you know how the write a press release you'll want to submit it to several press release submission services. You'll find several dozen of them with a simple internet search. Writing a good press release takes just a few minutes if you have all the facts and the results after releasing it can be spectacular.

(432 words)

Regards,

Shawn
 
Open for more projects as well :)
 
I have various articles that I need written about Traditional Hawaiian Tikis, please message me your skype.
 
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Got a review article, and it definitely reads great. No grammar or spelling mistakes, and I would safely use them for high quality web 2.0 posting\private blog network posts.

Thanks for the review

Looking for more orders now :)
 
== Review ==

Got a review copy from Anuj and I am happy with the article.

The article is informative and it is written according to my needs.

Keyword density was maintained at the rate which I wanted it to.

Overall,a Good Service
 
i need 700-800 word article, i intend to order 5 articles on bhw, prefferably today/tommorow, 1 article per seller, to check and compare who will do better job
PM me details how to pay for 700-800 word article
 
i need 700-800 word article, i intend to order 5 articles on bhw, prefferably today/tommorow, 1 article per seller, to check and compare who will do better job
PM me details how to pay for 700-800 word article

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PM sent with details
 
REVIEW

Free Review Copy Review:

As agreed, I would do a review on the content that anuj sent, so that is what I will review. At the end I have attached the article below for your own review. Please note I did not ask for any corrections, this is just based on what I got right off. Therefore, I am sure they would have corrected these if I had asked. At the same time, as I would recommend with any service, always do a test run before you jump in with both feet. This is not a way to slight Anuj, but what I have found to always create the best experience.

Review:
Spelling: Good - no mistakes present,
Grammar: Had 5 mistakes I saw.
Plagiarism: None found on standard sites, copyscape, plagium, etc.
Structure: Did not always provide good transitions between sentences, but overall it flowed well.
Content: I would say it could have added more substance and missed opportunities to really inform users, but in a elementary way it provided an understanding on how to write a press release.
Other: Flesch Reading Ease shows this at a 9th grade reading level.

Overall, a nice piece of content, that I might use for second tier backlinks. In terms of price, I think it is fairly close to the value given.

Regards,

Shawn

Thanks for the detailed review
 
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This article was well written and also incorporated all the KWs that I sent him for one of my client's websites. I recommend it if you need some articles written, definitely good quality!
 
REVIEW
== Review ==

Got a review copy from Anuj and I am happy with the article.

The article is informative and it is written according to my needs.

Keyword density was maintained at the rate which I wanted it to.

Overall,a Good Service

thanks for the review :)
open for more orders
 
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