I've made a sales letter. Need an opinion!

[auuuu]

I've made a sales letter about a new service that i'm currently promoting.

I've sent around 40 emails with this letter and just one accepted the work...so i believe that there is something that doesn't really work.

Is there anyone that can check it and give me a feedback?
Please let me know and i'll send you a PM with all the details!

Thank you so much!

 

[MrDoru]

paste the link bro, what do you want us to review?

 

[ihatecaptcha]

i guess it went spam box

 

[artizhay]

Send me the letter, how you're sending it, where the leads came from, etc.

 

[auuuu]

I'll PM you guys later, when i come back home.

I send them through my own email address, like 10-20/week so i believe that it's impossible that it hit the spam folder (i constantly use it for my personal thing either).

For this reason i think that probably there is something that doesn't really work with it...

 

[poweronics]

I'll PM you guys later, when i come back home.

I send them through my own email address, like 10-20/week so i believe that it's impossible that it hit the spam folder (i constantly use it for my personal thing either).

For this reason i think that probably there is something that doesn't really work with it...

What product are you promoting through that sales letter? If the product is having a very high competition from other products, you will have to work very hard.

 

[auuuu]

What product are you promoting through that sales letter? If the product is having a very high competition from other products, you will have to work very hard.

No man, it's not a product...it's a service and it's low competition (i guess).

 

[richv100]

Shoot me a PM I will take a look!

 

[auuuu]

Other are interessed to give me a review?

 

[SethTurin]

PM it my way, be glad to check it out.

 

[soberclnt]

Send me via PM.
Will check and let you know.

 

[pinakijena]

You can send the letter to me.

 

[verial]

I'll give you a critique for $100.

 

[imperial109]

Lol everyone wants your method. That's not too bad of a conversion ration. Read up on copywriting and nlp, update your letter, then do some split tests.

If anyone actually improves your conversion ratio with their suggestions, then my hats off to them.

Remember, give a man a fish, feed him for a day, teach a man to fish, feed him for a lifetime. In this case, teach yourself.

Cheers

 

[verial]

As a psychologist, I can tell you that NLP is a farce.