New Landing Page, Your Opinion?

[Professor12]

We are about to launch our new landing page BlackBook

Take a look and give me your feed back on what you think about it. What you like, what you don't like. What you would change. Rip it apart!!!

Will be doing testing soon on it, just finishing up the back end for it.
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Thanks BHW

 

[Glorzifen]

First impressions:

+very slick and clean. I like the straight lines and uncluttered design. The girl has nice hair. The lacey background is also great. Overall I love it.

-the VIP stamp could be a bit bigger and maybe the title. The title could be in a font or have some sort of effect that makes it stand out a bit more. Also - the lower horizontal bar that goes from black, to gray, to almost white, then back to gray, and back to black could be smoother (the transitions I mean).

One question concerning how this all works (and keep in mind that I'm fairly new to this whole scene)...does a customer have to enter their invite code every time they visit or do you use something to keep them 'signed in'?

 

[SamMott]

I want to know more is my first impression of landing on the page

In my browser i had to scoll down to find the sign in so possibly a little higer ?

But looks good

 

[Subsonic]

I have some spare time so I decided to show you visually what I would change

I would make the grey gradient darker to make it look more elegant and add some noise to remove banding. I'd also add some shadows here and there to make the layout look not so flat..

 

[thinkdevoid]

Agreed. The image banding due to to the gradient on the light end is annoying. Either lessen the gradient or texture it so its not as noticeable.

overall though, very clean feel.

 

[skohh]

The copy guys - nobody addresses this , I have my opinion , it's not bad . Think it will do ok, always be testing

 

[7878]

There's no CTA.

"Enter your invite key to gain access"

You always, always, always tell the user what to do next.

 

[buzz1212]

I think it looks great! However I would move the key-in box above the fold ( high left)
according to all the tests run on eye patterns. I assume your guests know what their
invited to, because I don't know if your selling a porno bible or a dating service or what?

 

[skadster]

Very nice looking but where's the hook? you've been invited sounds great, mysterious, But what can it do for me? What am i likely to get out of it?

Curiosity killed the cat, but would that make the cat curious enough? Just my nooby opinion, no offence.

 

[WebmasterDeluxe]

Seems off centered and a bit to high and right...otherwise looks good

 

[dryheat360]

whats your site for?

 

[skohh]

Very nice looking but where's the hook? you've been invited sounds great, mysterious, But what can it do for me? What am i likely to get out of it?

Curiosity killed the cat, but would that make the cat curious enough? Just my nooby opinion, no offence.

Yeah, well it has the hook. Speaking directly to the prospect, but your right .

Who are you
What is it
Do I even need it
Why should I believe

Etc

 

[skohh]

there's no cta.

"enter your invite key to gain access"

you always, always, always tell the user what to do next.

+10000000

 

[Professor12]

Thanks for all the feed back guys! Im agreeing with you with changing the gradient to be darker. I will get that fixed.

We are still working on the next step of it. which after you enter the invite code will take you to a sign up page. When that is up and running i will post it and get your feed back on it as well.

as for the ones that are asking what it is... It is an adult dating site that we are doing speedboink is our main site. but we are looking to make it cleaner and more inviting and sexy!

Skohh i agree with you that we need to get a little more of a hook on this page. I will have to work on that. Too late right now to try to figure it out been at it for about 12 hours now. need some sleep!

Keep the feed back coming guys. This is all great stuff. I like that everyone speaks their mind here! don't me shy to put it down!

 

[martinezfrost]

nice work good luck

 

[adworkmedia]

looks great in chrome although it is fairly hard to tell what reward will come once I've entered the email. I think if you included a "tag line" regarding the reward or how this will benefit the user it could really help.

 

[TehEpidemick]

yea i mean it looks nice and its cool and i would probably enter my email, if i knew why i was doing it

 

[marusia]

I think it looks really nice. It had me intrigued and wanting to know more.

 

[poweronics]

Nice layout of the page. It looks great on first look.