artizhay
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Er...if you're not specifying an affiliate ID, the sales probably won't be credited to you...
Anyway, as for the site:
1. I think, closer to the top, maybe where "Want to master Fiverr?" is, you need to say what Fiverr is. I mean, after saying Fiverr four times, you have "People advertise anything they would do for a fiver."
First of all, it's way better to just say $5, not fiver. And you need a better line to catch people's attention than that. And move it closer to the top, like I said. The top portion kind of assumes you already know what Fiverr is, but you describe it (barely) right above the fold (in fact, this could be at the fold or below it on some browsers). So you need to focus more on making $5 or more, every day, easily at the top of the site.
2. That gray bar on the left side of the design is kind of annoying. Why shouldn't it match the right border? The left border is like 1995 and the right is more modern. So you really oughta update it. The sharp contrast keeps drawing my eye away from the content and towards that border.
Anyway, as for the site:
1. I think, closer to the top, maybe where "Want to master Fiverr?" is, you need to say what Fiverr is. I mean, after saying Fiverr four times, you have "People advertise anything they would do for a fiver."
First of all, it's way better to just say $5, not fiver. And you need a better line to catch people's attention than that. And move it closer to the top, like I said. The top portion kind of assumes you already know what Fiverr is, but you describe it (barely) right above the fold (in fact, this could be at the fold or below it on some browsers). So you need to focus more on making $5 or more, every day, easily at the top of the site.
2. That gray bar on the left side of the design is kind of annoying. Why shouldn't it match the right border? The left border is like 1995 and the right is more modern. So you really oughta update it. The sharp contrast keeps drawing my eye away from the content and towards that border.
