My First Clickbank Site ...

[OTrap]

I've had this for awhile, but ... I'll be honest ... it sucked.

http://www.fistfullofcashsystem.com/

I've made some changes to the sales page, and it's not finished (I'm probably going to put some multimedia in there above the fold), but it's on its way, and I'm looking for feedback.

Also, a separate question, I wanted to know if, after a site gets approved, if I want to throw a splash page up, do I need to get it approved again?

DISCLAIMER: I'm looking for feedback and criticism. Not "Here, pay me to do it for you" posts. Call it foolish DIY attitude, but I'd rather learn to do things with excellence than to just pay others to do it for me and never learn to do it myself (in many cases, anyway).

Let me know what is good and what needs work. I know there are plenty on here making good money with CB sites, and I'd like their input.

 

[drey2k]

Take a picture of your own hand with a wad of cash in it and photoshop it up, use that as your logo. Your logo looks very amateurish for someone who makes 9 mil a year.

 

[wild1]

the website graphics and template needs work :/

 

[mikemarketer]

i think you need to redesign it again.and the 9 M is very big make it $100,000

 

[OTrap]

The template of the page is actually borrowed from a site I've seen previously.

Thanks for your input guys. I don't mind being called "amateurish." I'm self-taught, and continually learning.

And I actually do have a fist of cash image, and I tried it in a logo. Couldn't get it to look like I wanted it to.

I wanna make sure this is as good as possible before I test it and then officially launch it.

You guys have already been quite helpful.

 

[liquidglass]

The template of the page is actually borrowed from a site I've seen previously.

Thanks for your input guys. I don't mind being called "amateurish." I'm self-taught, and continually learning.

And I actually do have a fist of cash image, and I tried it in a logo. Couldn't get it to look like I wanted it to.

I wanna make sure this is as good as possible before I test it and then officially launch it.

You guys have already been quite helpful.

I thanked you because of your humility. It's something I appreciate in people.


I'm still new to BHW but as far as my opinion of your site.

Change the font you use when mentioning "fistfullofcash" program. It seems very rigid and you don't want anything that doesn't "flow" into the minds of people.

Also the logos on the boxes of the 'product' flash out too much and look sort of scammy.


As far as your background I would change it to a lighter color. The black subconsciously associates it as bad in some people's minds

I know you were going for contrast but it takes my eyes off the main page.

 

[jdog37]

i think you need to redesign it again.and the 9 M is very big make it $100,000

I agree with this ...you say you make a six figure income but over 1million is in fact a seven figure income.

 

[OTrap]

@liquidglass, thanks for the thanks and for the input.

@jdog, I can't believe I missed that. Nice catch!

 

[OTrap]

By the way, maybe my question got lost in the mix of the first post, but does anyone know if I can add a squeeze page without getting the whole damn site reapproved?

 

[ecki]

think this site doesn't look very trustwothy....especially this
photo with your indoor swiming pool ... but may be some
people believe everyhing

 

[anita_25]

9 KK ?? Jesus Christ !!!

 

[adrien23]

Hey man,
Unless you're good with graphics, I seriously need to suggest a cheap mini site...it'll look 10x better with and wont cost much anyways.

 

[OTrap]

I have since updated the site a bit. What do you guys think now?

I'll still be replacing some of the photos and wording, but how does the overall theme look now?

 

[anita_25]

I liked the previous design, you need a course of Potoshop ...

 

[maniac2002]

This is just my opinion, but I would get rid of the " as seen on Google, Bing, Yahoo, etc" I have seen those on other sites and I always laugh... It just sounds so stupid to me....I mean, really, it was on a search engine???? When I see that on a website or an ad, I laugh and go somewhere else. Just my 2 cents

 

[olm75]

ok first time using click bank and im using tracker202 to track, just wondering how long does it take clickbank's HOPs to show up in analytics... and do they even support links redirected from tracker202...

 

[Gupnup]

This is just my opinion, but I would get rid of the " as seen on Google, Bing, Yahoo, etc" I have seen those on other sites and I always laugh... It just sounds so stupid to me....I mean, really, it was on a search engine???? When I see that on a website or an ad, I laugh and go somewhere else. Just my 2 cents

Have to disagree here.

Sure for us, we know thats bull, but thats cause we know about IM.

For the average Joe, little logo can add a lot of "credibility".

 

[jyang]

i'm not a big fan of the header at the top, i would remove it so it doesnt look scammy and distract visitors

 

[OTrap]

Have to disagree here.

Sure for us, we know thats bull, but thats cause we know about IM.

For the average Joe, little logo can add a lot of "credibility".

This was kind of what I was thinking.

To those of us who know IM, something like this doesn't matter. However, I am thinking that the REASON you see it show up on so many sites is because it works, or at least it has for someone.

However, I also wondered if it was a little too big, or maybe too overplayed.

 

[OTrap]

I liked the previous design, you need a course of Potoshop ...

That may be something I do eventually, though I do find that I learn something better when I teach myself.

Also, I actually don't use Photoshop. Can't afford anything Adobe right now. For the time being, I use Paint.NET.