Is my landing page good enough ?

[fanaticmarketer]

Hello,

I'm trying to make money selling travel tours and guides in Romania. Now, I'm trying to be as lean as possible. I know it can be improved, but I just want to know if this is good enough to start doing conversions.

• Right now I'm running a facebook ad campain traffic focused.
• The PPC is 0.10 euros.
• I'm targeting french people interested in Romania and travels.
• I've gotten 30 clicks but not a single opt-in.

Can you share your thoughts on my page and the results ? (Dont mind the english typos, I've used google translate to do the translation, originally it's in french.)
Here's a screenshot of the page :

Thank's a lot !

 

[Blue Panda]

To be honest, in my opinion it looks like one of these scam sites: become rich in 1 day bla bla.

Its uber simple and do not have much content. Its really just to force the user to optin.

On the other hand, i like the structure of the page, its probably just the topic and so on. You should not expect to many optins with a site like that!

 

[693840]

Add a new york times logo

jk dont do that

 

[kvvni]

CPC is ok so the ad is ok.

personally i would try to put 2x optin form and check how it goes.
if it won’t work better, i would try to change the concept. as someone said above, it looks like scam lp’s.

 

[fanaticmarketer]

Thanks for the fast replies.

Well, all the content that I've read about landing pages said that it was important to keep it short, impacting and simple with strong CTA and urgency. So that's why I've chosen this route.
Now I'm thinking about implementing something like that :

Would that be better ? Each time i'm about to put in some extra work I try to remember to "keep it stupid simple".

 

[Blue Panda]

I like the new design, makes it look great!

If you want to sell tour guides for romania only, i would suggest to make more content about romania. Maybe make a few extra pages with fake storys or something.

You can also use the fake storys for keywords and so on.

 

[fanaticmarketer]

I like the new design, makes it look great!

If you want to sell tour guides for romania only, i would suggest to make more content about romania. Maybe make a few extra pages with fake storys or something.

You can also use the fake storys for keywords and so on.

Got it, thanks ! Yeah the screenshot was from the theme I didnt replace the text and the pictures yet.

 

[praetserge]

Second LP is by far better... I actually really like it.

 

[AAW]

The first design is a NO: it looked like a cheap hookup type of vacations.

the 2nd one has nothing to do with Romania! The top part of the page is very important part, you need to add image without any filter and the image should be something for people to see what they will see in Romania, try to let them imagine themselves in that spot.
put tons of pics and site they will visit, concentrate on few parts and don’t let it be very general, pick few amazing sites for fall and winter in Romania.

Also no one is thinking about travel now! Have you heard about the Covid LOL. May be that’s why no one is opting in.

 

[seojen]

I don't know why but I like the first one, short and on good looking. Anyway if you don't mind what theme do you use on both pages?

 

[BabyJoker]

Second one looks way better

 

[kvvni]

It’s a good idea: make a split test between 2 LPs.

 

[fanaticmarketer]

Thanks for all your opinions ! For the second theme its not live yet I have to customize it with my text and images.

I don't know why but I like the first one, short and on good looking. Anyway if you don't mind what theme do you use on both pages?

The first one I made it myself (I'm a web developer). The second one is called "taxa" I think you can set it up on wordpress :
https://colorlib.com/wp/template/taxa/

The first design is a NO: it looked like a cheap hookup type of vacations.

the 2nd one has nothing to do with Romania! The top part of the page is very important part, you need to add image without any filter and the image should be something for people to see what they will see in Romania, try to let them imagine themselves in that spot.
put tons of pics and site they will visit, concentrate on few parts and don’t let it be very general, pick few amazing sites for fall and winter in Romania.

Also no one is thinking about travel now! Have you heard about the Covid LOL. May be that’s why no one is opting in.

Yeah I have to tweak it, thanks for the insights ! I've thought about Covid but I'm gonna try it anyway.

 

[ShashiKumaar]

Adding Social Proof. Would gain trust among your new visitors. Will encourage to take more action.

 

[Bestindabiz]

If I landed on your site I'd hurry up and leave then I'd change all of my bank accounts lol. Seriously though the quality looks low I don't know much about websites though.

 

[Gogol]

Is my landing page good enough ?

Is it earning you more than you are spending?

Looks okay, but nothing out of this world.

 

[seoamz]

2nd one is OK.

Keep it simple, but not short.

 

[GeeLark AI]

Thanks for the fast replies.

Number 2 looks more better.

 

[JavascriptPufferfish]

"a billionaire vacation on a student's budget" i get what you are trying to go for, but "billionaire" makes me roll my eyes a bit. i think millionaire would be better, but maybe its just me. i am not an expert on landing pages, and it doesn't seem like anyone else here was off putted by it either. oh, and i like n2 better. but A/B testing is probably the way to go if you can afford it.

 

[Gogol]

Thanks for the fast replies.

Well, all the content that I've read about landing pages said that it was important to keep it short, impacting and simple with strong CTA and urgency. So that's why I've chosen this route.
Now I'm thinking about implementing something like that :

Would that be better ? Each time i'm about to put in some extra work I try to remember to "keep it stupid simple".

This looks better. A hell lot better.