Article Rewrite - is it good or bad for Money Site?

[thannish]

Hi,

I have rewritten the text, is it ok to use in Money Site? Below is the sample text...

Original Text

Writing a blog post is a tremendous challange. Then rank keywords on Google’s 1st page is another dreadful task. If you are facing same issues like this.

You have landed at the right place. Today, I am going to show you some really extraordinary strategies to write a successful post to rank keywords on Google’s first page.

I will try not to repeat those boring on-page and off-page SEO tips and tricks. What I will tell you that easiest way to write a masterpiece which can easily rank on Google search results.

It doesn’t matter how many days before you started you blog. It just the matter of writing content better then others who are already ranking there.

However, I won’t suggest you to totally ignore On page and off page SEO. But this is a long process my friend and you can’t make 1000 or 2000 authentic backlinks in a few days.

Rewritten Text

It's a huge challenge to write a blog post. Then ranking for those keywords on Google's first page is a big task. If you're faced with the same issue, you've come to the right place.

Today, I'll teach you some very unique techniques for writing a good post to rank keywords on the first page of Google.

I'm not going to repeat the on-page and off-page SEO tips. What I'll say to you is the best way of writing content that can be easily ranked on Google search results.

It doesn't matter how many days before you began your blog. The only thing is to write better content than others who are already in the rankings.

However, I'm not suggesting you ignore On-page and off-page SEO.

But this is a long process and you won't be able to make 1000 or 2000 real backlinks in a few days.

I checked in plagiarism sites, it shows 100% unique.

Give your feedback friends.

 

[Mr Positive]

Post the rewrite you should manually read it and fix grammar errors grammarly can help you with it post that it should be fine

 

[SEOzack]

Honestly, I wouldn't even have the original on my money site.

 

[thannish]

Post the rewrite you should manually read it and fix grammar errors grammarly can help you with it post that it should be fine

I am not fluent in English. After rewriting I have read the text & it is fine to me. I don't have a Grammarly premium, I think the free version is enough to check the grammar.

 

[donaldp]

Rewrite article on paragraph level, no each sentence. Simply read paragraph and tell the same thing in your words.

 

[thannish]

Rewrite article on paragraph level, no each sentence. Simply read paragraph and tell the same thing in your words.

Rewriting each sentence is taking time but I am looking for 100% uniqueness.

I am using tool. paragraph wise tool is not delivering good results.

 

[donaldp]

You don’t need to use tools, it may take some time to get comfortable with rephrasing whole paragraph but more you do it better you get. You get 100% uniqueness. Would you like to see samples?

 

[thannish]

You don’t need to use tools, it may take some time to get comfortable with rephrasing whole paragraph but more you do it better you get. You get 100% uniqueness. Would you like to see samples?

Why not PM me

 

[Whitewhistle]

you have to look at the text as a whole, not sentence by sentence or word by word. only then something decent and legit will happen

 

[Stuffedegg]

Read the original text, make notes on what the key points are.

Check if they are in an understandable and engaging order.

Rewrite the article in your own words. I know you said you are not fluent, but why not write it in your language, in your words, then translate it and Grammarly it?

Grammarly premium is a must. The free version is not enough. (Someone was selling them here for something like $4 a month. I have not used them, but have a look in the marketplace.)

They talk about:

Writing an article and ranking it - it is difficult.
We have some great strategies
Not repeating on/off-page SEO but don't ignore it
Time, since you wrote the blog, doesn't matter
content is what matters
Long process. You won't get huge amounts of backlinks in a few days.

When you have this for the whole article, you should order it in a way that will keep the readers engaged, and then build your article around it.

To be blatantly honest, neither of them are amazing, but yours is better and will get better the more you practice.

One issue that you may find though; you are talking about how to write a great article. That means you need to make it great to prove you know what you are doing. Furthermore, if you are talking about how to rank it well, it needs to rank well.

Not trying to put you down, but these are things that readers will notice. ("I can't trust this article if it doesn't read well and isn't ranked on the first page.")

Keep practicing, you will get better. Try using your own language and translating it, I am not sure if that will work, but it might.

 

[Evan Grayson]

When I read the paragraphs, they both almost looked identical to me. Maybe it will not look copied on plagiarism checking softwares but it requires some changing. Whenever rewriting something, take the essence of what is said originally, understand it and then spin it in your own words. Changing a few words just doesn't work mostly. Someone who went through the original text will easily find out that the rewritten text is copied.

 

[Greasedonkey]

You need to rewrite more. They shouldn't be similar. Different phrases, same meaning

 

[Mr. EliteSeo]

If there is no plagiairsm issue then you can post it.

 

[Lady Trieu]

It does not appear to be unique because of the same meaning. You have to rewrite it.

 

[Megaverse]

I am not fluent in English. After rewriting I have read the text & it is fine to me. I don't have a Grammarly premium, I think the free version is enough to check the grammar.

Even the premium version is not enough, mate.

Grammarly is good and helpful, no doubt but I have had to disagree with it a number of times..

Dude just try and get a premium version for yourself. It's the least you can do to help yourself become a better writer.

Btw, I would not call your copy a rewrite, it's a recopy.... not a rewrite.

 

[Stuffedegg]

Grammarly is good and helpful, no doubt but I have had to disagree with it a number of times..

I agree with this. I've seen articles that look the they just accepted all of the suggestions with no knowledge.

 

[troy23]

I think your new version is better.
The punctuation is better and it has a better flow.
Actually I would like to read the finished article as it looks interesting to me.

 

[SeRptrIx]

It will be much better by adding your own ideas and checking with the grammar premium.