Samurai-champloo
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Ok. Then I'll send the above posted article part to proofreader to fix and post it by topmorrow. Let's see what can he do
Can you rate this new writer?
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Dark Sky
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Probably the best bet.. Content sellers hire cheap writers and you will always end up with a different writer who makes different types of mistakes, so it is best decision to prepare and make sure you can fix all the different errors before hand. Goodluck OP!
Samurai-champloo
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OK, editing completed. check this. use zoom into read. what do you think
Note from Editor: I've used margin notes to ask questions and give examples in a few places that were confusing to me as a reader. There was also an issue with fonts changing, particularly when apostrophes were used. This is further explained in the margin notes. I was unsure if you were using UK English or US English. It seemed that most spelling were UK English, so I converted two US spellings to UK (travelled and moulded). In articles like this, try to stay away from using you/your. The audience is likely to be looking for a "professional" opinion, so a more formal usage is needed. I substituted "the runner" or "the user" for "you" in this piece.
Samurai-champloo
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looks like image isn't clear.
NOP. Wait. I'll post more clear image
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AceWallGromit
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I would not accept this writing as i found major portions of it were directly plagiarized. I reject all material submitted to me when it is so easy to find it has been merely cut and pasted from official websites. If you need to ask what is good content and you can’t find such blatent plagiarism then you will have a tough run despite any new AI spinnerbot you may be priming to sell here.
Samurai-champloo
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bro, you misunderstood. I'm not selling anything. That custom AI engine is Inhouse only and it's in development. It's not a spinner. It's like grammarly. But not available to public.
The very first post is a 'sample' . you mistook it as plagiarism. It's a 'sample' i got from writer who wrote that article @ https://runnerclick. com/under-armour-hovr-infinite-review/
I posted it here to get feedback on writing quality. i know that that it's already on the web.I got some feedback from here and later i took that sample and got edited by an editor (which i showed in image). And to see the difference between two.zzz
Samurai-champloo
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oops. double inserted page 1 and forgot insert full image of page 2 (which is attached). read it accordingly thanks
Samurai-champloo
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original or edited?
Purush
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I saw only first post and could not find edited or original there. Reading in mobile so don't go through entire post. I check later
Samurai-champloo
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ok
tomcatplayer
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man remind me to never get into content writing