Can someone check my first article

[vedeus]

Hello wise people,

I just wrote my very first testing article. If there is someone who has 5 minutes to take a look at that article and tell me their honest opinion, I would be very thankful!

Thank you!

 

[milk_and_cake]

Sure thing m8,

Hit me up.

 

[vedeus]

Sure thing m8,

Hit me up.

Sent you PM Thanks!

 

[Bawsaq]

I'd be more than happy to review your article.

 

[milk_and_cake]

Sent you PM Thanks!

No problem m8, glad to help.

The first impression with article was nice. Catchy title as well as subtitles which is always good for h2, h3, h4 tags etc.
Unique style of writing and very readable. With 1299 words and good formating this is good quality T1 article. Cool.

Cheers!

 

[vedeus]

I'd be more than happy to review your article.

I'm sending you PM rightaway! Thanks

No problem m8, glad to help.

The first impression with article was nice. Catchy title as well as subtitles which is always good for h2, h3, h4 tags etc.
Unique style of writing and very readable. With 1299 words and good formating this is good quality T1 article. Cool.

Cheers!

Really? Thank you I really appreciate that man! I think I need to work more on unique and rare words. Thanks again for your time!

 

[Bawsaq]

I must say, the article looks well written for someone who's not a native English speaker. Though, I've skimmed through the article and highlighted areas where it doesn't make sense or sounds weird. I'll PM you the link to the proof-read article. I haven't highlighted everything, just the parts that would really throw readers off.

Also, sometimes it's better to use more simple vocabulary. Sometimes using more 'extravagant' words make the content look unnatural. Using such words can be difficult for native English to do properly, so I definitely wouldn't suggest using too many as someone who's still practising their English writing.

I haven't looked into your keyword but if you wanted to rank this article you may have to make it longer. Adding a buyers guide to the end or something could help you extend your word count.

Besides these, the article is well formatted and readable.

 

[vedeus]

I must say, the article looks well written for someone who's not a native English speaker. Though, I've skimmed through the article and highlighted areas where it doesn't make sense or sounds weird. I'll PM you the link to the proof-read article. I haven't highlighted everything, just the parts that would really throw readers off.

Also, sometimes it's better to use more simple vocabulary. Sometimes using more 'extravagant' words make the content look unnatural. Using such words can be difficult for native English to do properly, so I definitely wouldn't suggest using too many as someone who's still practising their English writing.

I haven't looked into your keyword but if you wanted to rank this article you may have to make it longer. Adding a buyers guide to the end or something could help you extend your word count.

Besides these, the article is well formatted and readable.

I really appreciate your effort you put into it I have to say that I can see it now when you highlighted it.. I used some very weird phrases and it looks very unnatural. Will work more on simplicity. I will definitely add a buyer guide at the end of the article.

How does a buyer guide look like?

Thanks again!

 

[Bawsaq]

I really appreciate your effort you put into it I have to say that I can see it now when you highlighted it.. I used some very weird phrases and it looks very unnatural. Will work more on simplicity. I will definitely add a buyer guide at the end of the article.

How does a buyer guide look like?

Thanks again!

Not a problem, I'd also recommend getting Grammarly, it would help you a lot.
You can view an example of a buyers guide at the end of this article: https://10beasts.com/best-wireless-routers/

 

[vedeus]

Not a problem, I'd also recommend getting Grammarly, it would help you a lot.
You can view an example of a buyers guide at the end of this article: https://10beasts.com/best-wireless-routers/

Thanks again! Will check it for sure