I’m about to give up FB ads, Plz Help

[acebet101]

Hey Guys, I’m on the verge of just giving up and I don’t want to, I narrow my age down I narrow the interests down, I do everything I can’t get a sale or even a ATC Idk what else to do... this is how my ad looks

 

[acebet101]

Is there something I’m missing ? My budget is not a lot but still I should get one ATC and atleast one sale

 

[riseNgrind]

Water bottles are so overdone... would you buy a waterbottle?

 

[Capslocked]

Your ad copy sucks. Writing short copies is old news. You need to take some copywriting courses. Im also very interested in how your ad structure is. What your objective is/targeting size/countries/landing page etc. Impossible to give feedback with no info man.

 

[acebet101]

Water bottles are so overdone... would you buy a waterbottle?

I’ve done the same with sportswear and no luck...

 

[DulalKisku]

I would never buy water bottle from random seller/site.

I would prefer Amazon.

 

[Tenebra23]

Meh these products are so generic, people would rather use Amazon or local stores for that stuff

 

[acebet101]

Your ad copy sucks. Writing short copies is old news. You need to take some copywriting courses. Im also very interested in how your ad structure is. What your objective is/targeting size/countries/landing page etc. Impossible to give feedback with no info man.

Landing page would be the product page, targeting one ad 18-24 other ad 25-34 women and country is UK ... also interest would be sportswear and sports bra

 

[Badboy Enterprise]

its not how you want
its how it gets done
same niche

 

[acebet101]

Meh these products are so generic, people would rather use Amazon or local stores for that stuff

So your saying something more rare that you would have a hard time finding at a store ?

 

[acebet101]

its not how you want
its how it gets done
same niche

Did you gain a profit from it ?

 

[Capslocked]

Landing page would be the product page, targeting one ad 18-24 other ad 25-34 women and country is UK ... also interest would be sportswear and sports bra

Yes but we have no idea what that page looks like. What if it sucks? Have you done any audience insight research? Also, why narrow down groups you dont have any pixel data on? The picture is slowly becoming clear here.

 

[Badboy Enterprise]

Did you gain a profit from it ?

ADS
Spent $476
Profit $1814

 

[acebet101]

Yes but we have no idea what that page looks like. What if it sucks? Have you done any audience insight research? Also, why narrow down groups you dont have any pixel data on? The picture is slowly becoming clear here.

I did use audience insight to figure out the age of women for sportswear and sports bra’s

 

[acebet101]

ADS
Spent $476
Profit $1814

Damn nice job bud, maybe I’m too noob at it and still learning

 

[Capslocked]

I did use audience insight to figure out the age of women for sportswear and sports bra’s

You use audience insights to find groups to target that're relevant to your product, based of affinity. Then you split test those groups to see what works. You also can't narrow down age/gender without data from your pixel. What if your buyer category is 50 year old men and you didn't even bother to try targeting them. Use all ages/genders to begin with and then narrow down WITH DATA

 

[acebet101]

You use audience insights to find groups to target that're relevant to your product, based of affinity. Then you split test those groups to see what works. You also can't narrow down age/gender without data from your pixel. What if your buyer category is 50 year old men and you didn't even bother to try targeting them. Use all ages/genders to begin with and then narrow down WITH DATA

So one ad campaign might take months before it gets going ?

 

[INCC]

You thought you picked the low hanging fruit with these products, actually it's completely the opposite.

 

[Capslocked]

So one ad campaign might take months before it gets going ?

It comes down to your budget. I know someone who has a massive budget and pumps out split tests with lots of money to get data in no time. As a general rule of thumb though, you can't just run one variation of something and expects it to work, especially with that ad copy. I encourage you to PM me your landing page too along with a full Business Manager screenshot of useful KPIs so I can actually help you out here.

 

[X-R0]

You can find similar products all over the Net.
What is your USP! Like other users already asked: Would you buy a bottle from a random ad on Facebook?! certainly not!
I guess you jumped straight into a conversion campaign, right?