Bottle Label Design critique

[nayannp]

i wanted to know your thoughts on these

 

[nick nalisis]

Very cool , i like your designs this is awesome

 

[Shyam007]

Left one looks better to me. White also symbolises purity so may be better to go with it.

 

[nayannp]

Very cool , i like your designs this is awesome

Thank you bro

 

[nayannp]

Left one looks better to me. White also symbolises purity so may be better to go with it.

Thanks for suggesting sir

 

[Sceptic]

Honestly, the second font looks shitty, and the color isn't that great either. Sorry for being a bit harsh, but those are my thoughts regarding the design.

 

[nayannp]

Honestly, the second font looks shitty, and the color isn't that great either. Sorry for being a bit harsh, but those are my thoughts regarding the design.

Thanks for your honest review sir.These are not "harsh" in anyway they keep me working and improving my work.Thanks for your reviews again i hope you keep giving more of these reviews in my future works

 

[Dominor001]

The design looks good, I like the left one better. The logo is good but the text in bottom, I don't like the font

 

[nayannp]

The design looks good, I like the left one better. The logo is good but the text in bottom, I don't like the font

thanks for the critique.the majority is going towards left till now

 

[M4XW3LL]

Why don't you put them in a bottle mock-up? You should always put your designs on products you're designing for, because they often look different from the art-board.

 

[nayannp]

Why don't you put them in a bottle mock-up? You should always put your designs on products you're designing for, because they often look different from the art-board.

Thanks for the suggestion,Yes i will be putting them in the mockup these are actually for a olive oil bottle and i need to make or find cause i dont have such mockup right now.

 

[safeSEOboost]

I would say it is a good start, but we need to see the entire design.
Test different fonts.

 

[nayannp]

I would say it is a good start, but we need to see the entire design.
Test different fonts.

Thanks i will definitely try different fonts

 

[bartosimpsonio]

Funny most recommended the left one, I like the colors on the right better.

 

[MisterF]

I think that the left is more eyecatching, the right one the colours are more subtle and blend in and give a calmer feel.

 

[bartosimpsonio]

I think that the left is more eyecatching, the right one the colours are more subtle and blend in and give a calmer feel.

Exactly. The left one has more contrast. The one on the right is more "relaxing" indeed. Left one may attract more sales on the shelf, hadn't thought of it that way.

 

[nayannp]

Funny most recommended the left one, I like the colors on the right better.

I think that the left is more eyecatching, the right one the colours are more subtle and blend in and give a calmer feel.

So,These two posts give me idea of why not i try to gather both of these feautures in them and make the fonts correct

 

[CaptainKorruptz]

Left for sure, the font is the only problem in my opinion, you need to make the top part be the focal point and the bottom half be less important... change size and style and you'd be good to go

 

[M4XW3LL]

 

[nayannp]

the bottle mockups in the last are great.The clients want something similar but in small size cause its 15ml