My first hard amazon affiliate journey

[alhrms]

I'm sorry, can you expand on "I am really good with on page seo?"

Back in the day when I did 1500 word articles, I was doing fine but with these long ass articles (3k+ words) I get a bit lost. What are some of the things you keep an eye on when optimizing your articles?

I have articles with 4000k PM and i will show u how is it !

 

[Pretyyy]

OP was kind enough to let me browse a bit his website and here is my opinion:

At first, I didn't expect such a clean landing page. I was expecting something like a blogroll with catchy titles. Good job on that.
The theme is super clean but some typos deserve to be capitalized in my opinion (like said before, the footer links...).
I'd work a bit more on the lead generation box, maybe go for a 2 columns style instead of a box this much wide?
I don't personally like the white background around the fun fact, it does not match with the rest of the homepage.
In the body of some articles, there is sometimes a lot of spacing between <p> and I found it annoying to read.
I can feel the Brian Dean's touch a bit everywhere on your website, especially on posts titles and formatting
Green CTA is well designed, but I'm worried about the flashiness of the green you're using. You're not targeting web designers here, maybe you should adjust or A/B test.

EDIT: Maybe you're not indexing category pages, but if you do, you need to work on titles/desc. Just pointing it out in case you forgot.

That's it for my quick tour of your website.

Great job overall, scale it up.

 

[madi88]

Good luck with your journey bro
I have a question, which service do you use for press release? have you seen any result yet?

 

[alhrms]

At first, I didn't expect such a clean landing page. I was expecting something like a blogroll with catchy titles. Good job on that.

Thank you As I said I want to do something different

The theme is super clean but some typos deserve to be capitalized in my opinion (like said before, the footer links...).

I work on it

I'd work a bit more on the lead generation box, maybe go for a 2 columns style instead of a box this much wide?

i thing its okay for now maybe In the future I will do something different


I don't personally like the white background around the fun fact, it does not match with the rest of the homepage.


This is a simple marketing trick if you come after 5-7 to my site u will see some Really great trick to make money

In the body of some articles, there is sometimes a lot of spacing between <p> and I found it annoying to read.

Can you please send me what you did not like specifically

I can feel the Brian Dean's touch a bit everywhere on your website, especially on posts titles and formatting

hehehe You are really right ( Smart )

Green CTA is well designed, but I'm worried about the flashiness of the green you're using. You're not targeting web designers here, maybe you should adjust or A/B test.

So you really do not know what Green CTA means Believe me it is very special.


EDIT: Maybe you're not indexing category pages, but if you do, you need to work on titles/desc. Just pointing it out in case you forgot.

For category pages It's too early to publish it I want a lot of articles but after that i can use it



That's it for my quick tour of your website.

Great job overall, scale it up.


Thank you for your quick review and i will fix what It is actually important to fix it

 

[alhrms]

Good luck with your journey bro
I have a question, which service do you use for press release? have you seen any result yet?

ITS OUTSIDE BHW

 

[madi88]

ITS OUTSIDE BHW

Okay,
Are the press release still good for seo?

 

[rioyee]

What anchor text did you use for press release?

 

[alhrms]

Okay,
Are the press release still good for seo?

YES its good if u know what u are doing

What anchor text did you use for press release?

Keyword+ word and brand name

 

[rioyee]

YES its good if u know what u are doing




Keyword+ word and brand name

Three anchors for press release?

 

[alhrms]

Small update

My site is dancing really good

 

[Rikabu]

Hi i'm glad that i had a chance to review the OP site. The landing page is super nice and it doesn't look like a affiliate site but like a branded one. The images and other visual presentation used in the articles looks great, i hope this may help you to get few natural links from authority sites. The social bar is not properly aligned or it may be little too big that hides the content and makes users hard to read the content. Op, please fix the about us page there is some left outs from the original theme. Overall the site is beyond my expectation and Good luck with the journey.

 

[alhrms]

Hi i'm glad that i had a chance to review the OP site. The landing page is super nice and it doesn't look like a affiliate site but like a branded one. The images and other visual presentation used in the articles looks great, i hope this may help you to get few natural links from authority sites. The social bar is not properly aligned or it may be little too big that hides the content and makes users hard to read the content. Op, please fix the about us page there is some left outs from the original theme. Overall the site is beyond my expectation and Good luck with the journey.

In the first, thank you for your review It was Nice from u, And about ( about us page ) im working on it it’s teak time but I will fix it in 2 days and this page it was just a test for home page and that was mistake.


And about social bar can u pls send me screenshots about it? Cuz it’s looking from my pc great so maybe it’s somthing wrong.

Thank you bro

 

[madi88]

I like it, nice work OP.
Your website is very well designed. It's clear, easy to use and everything is fast.
It has really great/informative content with a good seo service you'll rank for some good keywords in the first 3 months.
Best of luck with your project OP!
Note: I think sticky ads will distract the reader and reduce your Amazon affiliate revenue!!

 

[alhrms]

I like it, nice work OP.
Your website is very well designed. It's clear, easy to use and everything is fast.
It has really great/informative content with a good seo service you'll rank for some good keywords in the first 3 months.
Best of luck with your project OP!
Note: I think sticky ads will distract the reader and reduce your Amazon affiliate revenue!!

Thank you for your review, In fact, I was thinking to removed but now I will remove it

Thank you bro

 

[darkblitzrc]

following this journey. Would you mind pming me your website so I could look at it? if not thats okay. Also I was planning to do something similar and outsource most of it like content, but kinda wondering where did you bought yours? Was it here in bhw? Kinda new to these aspect of buying content. Its okay if you dont want to reveal your sources, just asking.

 

[alhrms]

following this journey. Would you mind pming me your website so I could look at it? if not thats okay. Also I was planning to do something similar and outsource most of it like content, but kinda wondering where did you bought yours? Was it here in bhw? Kinda new to these aspect of buying content. Its okay if you dont want to reveal your sources, just asking.

PM U BRO

 

[sarutobi87]

I also just started an amazon site about 3 months ago. Been dragging my feet but suprisingly all my keywords are top 100. One is at #35 but it is for a 350s/m keyword.

I have done nothing to it only added 14 pages of content with good onpage.

I am hoping your journey rekindles my fire for it

Good luck.

 

[darkblitzrc]

I just checked out OP site and let me tell you, Im impressed a lot, its not your typical affiliate site, its very clean made and honestly I love the way its designed! Im sure you will succeed with this site. However, I would advise you to take a look at some of your articles because idk if its only me but I see some parts where the grammar is not good and also I think the layout of the article could be a bit better and more condensed instead of writing 2-3 lines and putting a picture in between.

So in short the layout is GREAT, i love it but take a look at your content which is wierd that has grammar errors because you paid for it?

anyways, keep it up!

 

[alhrms]

I also just started an amazon site about 3 months ago. Been dragging my feet but suprisingly all my keywords are top 100. One is at #35 but it is for a 350s/m keyword.

I have done nothing to it only added 14 pages of content with good onpage.

I am hoping your journey rekindles my fire for it

Good luck.

Great job
U just neeed time + Hard work + Great backlinks = $$$

I just checked out OP site and let me tell you, Im impressed a lot, its not your typical affiliate site, its very clean made and honestly I love the way its designed! Im sure you will succeed with this site. However, I would advise you to take a look at some of your articles because idk if its only me but I see some parts where the grammar is not good and also I think the layout of the article could be a bit better and more condensed instead of writing 2-3 lines and putting a picture in between.

So in short the layout is GREAT, i love it but take a look at your content which is wierd that has grammar errors because you paid for it?

anyways, keep it up!

THank you brother for your review
In fact, I am working on redrafting all articles now to Wipe a lot and modify a lot with new content design so i know about this problem.

Thanks again my friend

Cheers

 

[readytowork]

Good luck. It inspires us to step further and gain success.