Need some help for my daughter

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My daughter has submitted a remix of "Way Back" by Vicetone as part of a Splice/Monstercat competition. This is her 2nd go at one of these and she is looking for some feedback if you have a minute.

If you could give her a few likes and plays to boost her entry the blackhat way, that would be appreciated ;) (I could not find a bot!).

https://splice.com/PurplePickard/vicetone---way-back-feat-cozi-zuehlsdorf-exothermic-remix

Vocals is Vicetone, composition is hers.

She appreciated the feedback last time.
 
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K114a said:
Good one. Hope she'll win :)
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Thank you. When it comes to anything IT or music, I try to encourage both my daughters as much as possible. She starts college this year and has decided to do game design (her choice, no pushing from me). She is a great little programmer and loves anything technical. Loves her music as well.
 
fasttrak said:
My daughter has submitted a remix of "Way Back" by Vicetone as part of a Splice/Monstercat competition. This is her 2nd go at one of these and she is looking for some feedback if you have a minute.

If you could give her a few likes and plays to boost her entry the blackhat way, that would be appreciated ;) (I could not find a bot!).

https://splice.com/PurplePickard/vicetone---way-back-feat-cozi-zuehlsdorf-exothermic-remix

Vocals is Vicetone, composition is hers.

She appreciated the feedback last time.
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Hello dad, first have my cheers for supporting your child, I know it's not a big deal but we live in such a crooked world that I still find amazing when I see the parents actively doing something for their kid (more than providing, I mean).
Well I don't know the level of the concurse you daughter has applied, it's not my kind of music but I can feel the song is a but too dull, it's part of the genre, but if you jump from minute 1 to 3 you won't notice much, I believe the chorus is kinda weak too, it needs more impact, or it's gonna ended up bland and annoying the listener! In overral it's not bad, but in my opinion if your daughter make it more fancy I think she will have bigger chances of winning, best of luck!
 
FernandoAleixo said:
Hello dad, first have my cheers for supporting your child, I know it's not a big deal but we live in such a crooked world that I still find amazing when I see the parents actively doing something for their kid (more than providing, I mean).
Well I don't know the level of the concurse you daughter has applied, it's not my kind of music but I can feel the song is a but too dull, it's part of the genre, but if you jump from minute 1 to 3 you won't notice much, I believe the chorus is kinda weak too, it needs more impact, or it's gonna ended up bland and annoying the listener! In overral it's not bad, but in my opinion if your daughter make it more fancy I think she will have bigger chances of winning, best of luck!
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Thanks for the feedback, I will let her know. The original song can be heard here. The competition provide the vocals and ask for something different to the original as part of the remix, unique, basically an overlay of the vocals onto a unique track.
 
Valiant effort for a beginner. The melody is quite nice but for this style, there is a serious lack of bass in my opinion. The synth riff is a nice touch but it should be accompanied by some "wubwubwubs" for the lack of a better term. And as beforehand mentioned, there is no clear drop. The way this kind of music works is ups and downs. Meaning you build up and then do the chorus, then start building up again etc. Anyway, hope your daughter does well :)

 
kenksk said:
Valiant effort for a beginner. The melody is quite nice but for this style, there is a serious lack of bass in my opinion. The synth riff is a nice touch but it should be accompanied by some "wubwubwubs" for the lack of a better term. And as beforehand mentioned, there is no clear drop. The way this kind of music works is ups and downs. Meaning you build up and then do the chorus, then start building up again etc. Anyway, hope your daughter does well :)

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Thanks for taking the time to listen and provide feedback. I will pass it on and I agree with what you said personally.
 
Good luck to your daughter, one of the best Dad I've encountered across in leveraging the entire BHW network!!

Fantastic not 4 but 10!!!

Counting On Yours Success,
C.
 
i think the tune sounds fantastic being honest ,i like the sound completly your daughter very talented , your a grate dad and it brillaint your daughter a programmer and in games , i think apple phone games where the cash is, only my opinion.

grate dad brilaint tune 10/10, well done dads little princess .


right, blackhat boys and girls ....

make a programe to join spilce.com and add comments and likes .​

common help this dad .

daddy power ...
 
redarrow said:
i think the tune sounds fantastic being honest ,i like the sound completly your daughter very talented , your a grate dad and it brillaint your daughter a programmer and in games , i think apple phone games where the cash is, only my opinion.

grate dad brilaint tune 10/10, well done dads little princess .


right, blackhat boys and girls ....

make a programe to join spilce.com and add comments and likes .​

common help this dad .

daddy power ...
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Now thats the BHW attitude we love from @redarrow. Thank you, that brought a big smile to my daughters face (who is reading over my shoulder!).

darklich said:
Well as a dad myself...
Done! Good Luck.
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
 
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