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Summary
For the review, I asked
@Whitehatservices to write a 3,000 word article for me. I sent him the following information.
For the price range, I was surprised to receive an article that was not only well-researched, but fairly interesting as well. The details of my experience with this service are below.
Service Highlights
- So the article I received was fairly interesting. The flow between paragraphs and sections is decent, the spelling is correct for the most part, and the examples provided really caught my attention.
- The topic was well-researched.
- It passed the plagiarism check I performed as being 100% unique.
- I was reading through the article a bit quickly, but I didn't notice any spelling errors.
- In my opinion, it feels like an article targeted at college undergraduates, which is precisely what I sent @Whitehatservices for my target audience.
- US English spelling and grammar conventions were used, just as I requested.
What Could Use Improvement
- There were a total of 5 grammar mistakes: a missing word, a comma where it shouldn't be, and 3 erroneous spaces. However, for both the price range and the length of the article, this is not bad at all.
- There were a couple of paragraphs that could've been longer. For instance, there was one university study where a monkey's brain was connected to an electrical meter to see if the monkey could control the meter's level with thought alone. Are you wondering what happened next? So am I, because the results of the experiment weren't stated in the article.
- The conclusion of the article was a little weak; additional details from the article body could've been summarised in the conclusion.
Additional Information
- Since there isn't a questionnaire, feel free to use the list I sent @Whitehatservices in the quote above.
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