Native English speakers, help me!

[louiszhao]

Hi everyone,

1. Improving life's beauty.

2. Improving the beauty of life.

Are they the same meaning? If they are the same, which one do you choose to make it a slogan.

Thank you very much!

 

[darkrobe]

They both basically have the same meaning. It depends on what it is for. If it's a product or service we'd need t see it in order to judge it.

 

[hasan7707]

They actually mean the same.

I vote for 2, because I find it more stroking / striking that way.

But then again, it's just my 2 cents.

 

[louiszhao]

They both basically have the same meaning. It depends on what it is for. If it's a product or service we'd need t see it in order to judge it.

The company has 3 fields: fashion, cosmetic, spa.

 

[davids355]

Second is better, I think always a good rule is the simpler the better - first one because it’s got the apostrophe it just makes it a bit complicated.

Maybe second one is too long also.

Maybe -

Make life beautiful.
Make your life beautiful.
Beautiful yourself.
You are beautiful.

?

 

[Sam Vere]

Improving the beauty of life. - every time - A bold statement though - I suggest making a claim like that will go against a lot of people as they would intuitively argue that the only entity that can claim to Improve the beauty of life would be (their) God. I suggest you stay close but make a slight reframe

Accentuating the beauty of life
Highlighting the beauty of life
Underlining the beauty of life

or

For A Beautiful Life
Its A Beautiful Life

I dont know the product of the personality of its owner so I cannot say what I would advise -

Good luck with it though, and well done for asking!

All the best

Sam