Is my grammar that bad?!

[bvb]

OK, I'm trying to post an ad but it won't get accepted because of spelling and/or grammar errors.

Can someone please tell me what's wrong with this sentence:


Who do you support for President? Click here to vote for Barrack Obama, Hillary Clinton, or John McCain and win $100.

 

[samloron]

I don't see any grammar errors. They must be blind or they must be the ones with grammar problems whomever they are.

 

[snowwhite]

try "who will you support"

 

[shakybaky]

its the names. Names wont always go into forms as correct spelling. Try putting quote marks around the names. That works some places.

 

[bvb]

OK I'll give it a try. I think the error might be with the punctuation and the "and win $100" part. I think there might need to be a comma before the "and"?

 

[Needhelp]

If you want to be really picky take the comma out before the "or". Thats all I would change. Never put a comma before an "and".

 

[bvb]

Now they are telling me the text and/or image of this ad does not accurately represent the offer being advertised.

How annoying!

 

[Essential Clix]

Needhelp is correct, lose the comma before the "or". Also, try it without using their first names and see if that helps.

 

[havokb8]

Ive got a very simple solution for you. Its "Barack" not "Barrack"

 

[boomboomer]

Ive got a very simple solution for you. Its "Barack" not "Barrack"

A li'l off topic:
At least thats better than the reporter's 'Osama' gaffe ..