Feedback for my SHOPIFY store

tandy11

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Hi guys, I'v been changing my layout alot, before I continue to finish the store, could you give me some feedback on the landing page. Thankyou

http://Www.specializedearings.com

Note: I will be changing the domain name once store is finished
 
Dude, the layout looks nice. Which theme were you using.
 
Thanks dude that made my day! iv been staring at it all day thinking it was awful, im a perfectionist so everything looks awful to me so i really needed some fresh eyes :P

Its the debut theme btw
 
i personally dont like that you directly come to an ring without choosing anything, the listing below is nice but this "flower ring" is just irritating
edit: well also this "need help?" on the bottom left is kinda strange from my personal experience those things are always on the right bottom or just on the right screen
 
Make a page with a tutorial on how people can measure and get their ring size. 99% of people don't know thus you'll either have a shitton of customer support to do or a metric f*ckton of returns.
 
Thankyou for feedback guys, I'v changed it a bit more and added testimonials, what do you think?

i personally dont like that you directly come to an ring without choosing anything, the listing below is nice but this "flower ring" is just irritating
edit: well also this "need help?" on the bottom left is kinda strange from my personal experience those things are always on the right bottom or just on the right screen

I'm English we always have things on the left :P we walk up stairs the left, we drive on the left, we do everything on the left so it looked weird for me on the right :P
 
Heavy work on default theme. Good luck OP.
Any reason you have gone shopify and not WP/woo?
 
Yes. It looks nice. But I don't know why did you put "START BROWSING!" button on the top of the page.
Let visitors to scroll down through testimonials to the products.
 
Heavy work on default theme. Good luck OP.
Any reason you have gone shopify and not WP/woo?

Thankyou I dont have any money at all, I have a facebook account with a £600 thresh hold for ads, so i'm planning on using that I'v never.

I just assumed since all the youtubers use shopify that it was the best route, and since im familiar with shopify now. Im not aware of the advantages of using Woocommerce over shopify

Yes. It looks nice. But I don't know why did you put "START BROWSING!" button on the top of the page.
Let visitors to scroll down through testimonials to the products.

Its just to add engagement, Needed a picture at the top but it would look to plain without a button
 
Thankyou I dont have any money at all, I have a facebook account with a £600 thresh hold for ads, so i'm planning on using that I'v never.

I just assumed since all the youtubers use shopify that it was the best route, and since im familiar with shopify now. Im not aware of the advantages of using Woocommerce over shopify



Its just to add engagement, Needed a picture at the top but it would look to plain without a button
I don`t know how shopify works, as I build my own websites on my hosting, but you can add a Read more button instead of start browsing and use a in page link (http:www.yourdomain.tld/page#row-you-want-to-show), for example taking people to the testimonials below, to make sure people will see your full home page instead of getting redirected right from the spot. You can have Browse products below to redirect to your products. Just an idea.
 
I don`t know how shopify works, as I build my own websites on my hosting, but you can add a Read more button instead of start browsing and use a in page link (http:http://www.yourdomain.tld/page#row-you-want-to-show), for example taking people to the testimonials below, to make sure people will see your full home page instead of getting redirected right from the spot. You can have Browse products below to redirect to your products. Just an idea.

Thanks i will definetly look into doing this, I never though of adding a read more button instead of browsing, Quick question, My logo was a quick design by me, do you think i should make a new one?
 
Very good shop breh , I think you should remove your website , because will do exactly the same as you =/
 
Hey.

Just an observation about the website name on the home page.

'specialized jewellery'.

'specialized' is American English. In British English we use 'specialised'

But 'Jewellery' is British English. In American English they use 'Jewelry'.

I'm not pointing this out to be a pedantic dick, it's just that it might be an issue with keyword searches, SEO, SERPs etc.

An American will probably search for 'specialized jewelry' and someone who speaks British English might search for 'specialised jewellery'.

Maybe by mixing them up it might affect some keyword searching or on page SEO or something?

Just something to think about, I know you said you are changing the domain name.

Best of luck!
 
Hey.

Just an observation about the website name on the home page.

'specialized jewellery'.

'specialized' is American English. In British English we use 'specialised'

But 'Jewellery' is British English. In American English they use 'Jewelry'.

I'm not pointing this out to be a pedantic dick, it's just that it might be an issue with keyword searches, SEO, SERPs etc.

An American will probably search for 'specialized jewelry' and someone who speaks British English might search for 'specialised jewellery'.

Maybe by mixing them up it might affect some keyword searching or on page SEO or something?

Just something to think about, I know you said you are changing the domain name.

Best of luck!

Wow that's actually amazing feedback, Im only selling to the USA hence "specialized" but I'm british so I always thought both spelled it jewellery, Thanks for the info appreciate it! :)
 
Wow that's actually amazing feedback, Im only selling to the USA hence "specialized" but I'm british so I always thought both spelled it jewellery, Thanks for the info appreciate it! :)

No probs, I teach English abroad and actually only noticed Jewelry/Jewellery about 3 weeks ago, it was in a book!. But I just checked and it is actually spelled 'earring' with 2 r's! So better check that too. ;)
 
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