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Would love a couple reviews of my landing page

Discussion in 'Black Hat SEO' started by John Dough, Jan 5, 2009.

  1. John Dough

    John Dough Regular Member

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    Hi! I have a landing page, and I'm stuck trying to decide how professional to make it look. I have noticed that the worse the page looks, the less likely people are to think that they are being pitched. I'd like a couple members (100+ posts please) to review my page if you don't mind, and let me know what you think.

    Please PM me for the link if you wouldn't mind helping me out.

    Thanks!
    John
     
  2. internetNinja

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    Looks pretty good to me but I am not an expert on these things.
    It's probably good that it's not 800 feet long like some of these things seem to be because one gets bored reading it all.

    Personally whenever I see something like this, I always scroll to the bottom immediately to look for the price. Maybe it's because I have been burned by these a couple times. I didn't see a price so if forced me to read the page. That's a good thing (for you).

    It's also a good thing that it doesn't make outrageous income claims, like You Can Make $14,837 month on Craigs List...Everyone knows stuff like that is B.S.

    The only thing(s) I would change if it was me is the "no spam" area. I would make that stand out a little more. People are so paranoid about their email addresses. Maybe make the font a tad bigger and make the word "spam" red and bold. Or better yet "We hate spam" red and bold.

    The only other thing that kind of strikes me a little off is the first sentence, "Take your business to the next level". Just seems over used (I mean in general in the world). I would personally say something like "Leverage Craigslist to increase your customers exponentially" or something like that.

    But then again...Don't listen to me...I haven't made a damn thing online. LOL!

    Good luck! :23:
     
  3. John Dough

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    Thanks for the review bro. Actually though it is a different site that I need some input on, not the one in my sig. If you want to PM me, I'll shoot you the link.

    Thanks for the input though! You made a few valid points!

    John
     
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    I love this place. Thanks. Link sent.

    John
     
  6. internetNinja

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    Oh..DUH! Sorry, I missed that part. Well send me a link and I will review the one you actually want reviewed. And I also promise to read more carefully the entire post from now on :eek: Yeah, like I have time. :rolleyes: