I wrote a Sales Letter to a company and I want somebody to read it over and see if they think 'this' kind of style is okay, etc. I wanted to keep it really 'human' and not sound like it was a copy/pasted message. In any case, if you're interested, just post here and I'll send you a PM. It'll have the letter and the website that I want to send that letter to. Thanks a lot guys. P.S. I know there will be people who JUST want to see it without giving any advice back.. Umm.. I guess it's fine as well. But even writing, "Keep working on it" or, "I would change a bit here and there" would be more then enough. Thank you so much.