Whats wrong with my method??

EdwardD

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Tonight I'm not here to whine like all those noobs that ask you how do I make money and all they want is to give their paypal email and get rich over night...

but im tired... and I've lost motivation... been trying methods here during 3 months and my balance is $0.00 and hundreds of lost hours :(


whats wrong with this:




I post this ad at CL selling a BB storm for $300,


I post 2, very similar 1 in NY and 1 in Miami.

The ads are so good that today I got 75 mails, I guess thats very good for just 2 ads, isint it?

well then I wait a couple hours and reply them with this: (trying to sound as real as possible)

hey sarah,

I've already sold this phone, I was given $350 cash, apparently this phone is sold out until 2009... but I looked up the website where my wife won it, I always thought se was so naive for believing in the internet advertisers telling you can win things... but I guess she proved me wrong.. or at least that this website works: its http://freebbstorm.info she filled their offer 13 days ago. GL


and out of 75 emails, my stats show me that just 7 went to the website, and my aff tells me that none converted...

Please fellow blackhaters, tell this noob what hes doing wrong... cuz hes really trying...
 
How many visits total have you had? Your CTR is going to be low using that strategy and then your conversion rate is going to be low on the CTR as well. My CL ads get I'm sure thousands and thousands of impressions and then I get a decent amount of clicks and then maybe 1 in 150 or so convert. I'm no pro so my conversion rate sucks but unless you've got more than 1k clicks and no converts would I really be worried.
 
It's just a numbers game and you have nowhere near enough data to come to any conclusions...
 
edward..i advise you..IF...still cant convert sales for you...then you change another product or service to promote with...DONT waste time in waiting..
 
Hmm..the response looks spammy to me.
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I've already sold this phone, I was given $350 cash, apparently this phone is sold out until 2009...
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but I looked up the website where my wife won it, I always thought se was so naive for believing in the internet advertisers telling you can win things... but I guess she proved me wrong.. or at least that this website works: its http://freebbstorm.info she filled their offer 13 days ago. GL
..you`re trying too hard to get them on the website.
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I always thought se was so naive for believing in the internet advertisers telling you can win things...
You know what I learned from 5 years of psychology practice? NEVER mention anything even remotely negative about the product in your ad copy. If I tell you ""Don`t think this is scam!",what will you think? That this is scam of course. In fact..now you begin to doubt my words.. As you`re reading this you slowly start to think that maybe I`m playing with you..maybe I have something to gain from you listening to my advice.....You may pause and think.

Hehe,relax.Anyway see how easy it is to f*ck something up by not using the best words?
Also 75 emails are not enough. Good luck.
 
well I see 2 things that could be screwing you up. First off I followed your link to your bbinfo site and then clicked through to your email submit. it seems you've iframed the offer because on the blue apple research page it still says your website in the location bar. the iframe could be messing you up and preventing you from getting credit. I know many offers stopped working with iframes when networks got smart.

Also did you notice that the page you are forwarding to isn't a blackberry storm page? It is a promotion to win a $150 gift card from chilis. If i was interested in a blackberry storm and was taken to a page to win a chilis gift card i certainly wouldn't give up my email.


AND also I can tell your afilliate company is C0#pe-acK They have reps who read bhw so if one of them comes to this thread you could find your account being axed for the 2-3 program violations i saw. Pull your link from bhw if you can or pull your cl ad. All they have to do to get your aff id is open the frame in a new window on the landing page.
 
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wth cant edit post, I want to take out my links grr
 
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