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What sounds more convincing?

Discussion in 'CPA' started by SenzuBean, Feb 28, 2013.

  1. SenzuBean

    SenzuBean Junior Member

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    Hey guys I'm doing PPD and earning $20 - $30 a day. Currently I am using PPD / Youtube. Let's say you are a random person who wants what I'm offering say.... a keygen or something. What would say more convincing?

    1. Hello thanks for being interested in my so an so. To download this you must please complete one survey. I'm offering this for free.. FOR FREE! It's not alot to ask. Me and you both benefit from this!

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    2. This file is password locked to protect it from being leeched. To retrieve the password please go to (link with the offers)

    Which one would you say would have more of a chance to get someone to attempt a offer?
     
  2. tnhomestead

    tnhomestead Regular Member

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    Me? I would go for the complete one survey choice, would seem more legit. Other I would just go to the next one I saw in Google.
     
  3. ChEcKeD

    ChEcKeD Senior Member

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    I would go with the second one. I just like the use of the word 'leeched' even though it doesn't make any sense it sounds like a technical term.
     
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  4. Conor

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    I agree. People are douchebags, if you tell them that you are also benefiting from it, they won't want to help you. I don't wanna help the Wikipedia guy when he asks for donations ^^
     
  5. lpsierra

    lpsierra Regular Member

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    I would say the second one because like chEcKeD said, the word leech sounds like a technical term which makes it more convincing. However, instead of "please go to (link)", why not be blunt and say "to retrieve the password, you must complete a survey to unlock the file"
     
  6. sapo

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    the second one has the set up pitch right but the kill is lacking.
     
  7. Berkeli

    Berkeli Regular Member

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    you are bad and you should feel bad. wikipedia has a meth formula
     
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    Begging for a survey fulfilling isn't the right call here. Make it look like you are successful, make them feel you don't need them to do it.
     
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    The second one seems more convincing. You should test both of them to see actual results and then choose the best performing text.
     
  10. parepare

    parepare Newbie

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    Second one.