What do you think of my youtube video?

I hate bux sites. But anyways, im gonna test a couple of them to see if they will actually pay at all. So I launched this video here:


I know a made a few lil mistakes with notepad, but im lazy so
anyways, what do yall think? Any tips on improving the video itself, and promotion on youtube?

remove the *

Hey we are not able to watch the video, you embeded the video in qoate, please remove the quote tag.

yeah sorry, its late at night, was noobing it out.