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What do you think of my sales page video?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by kytro360, Mar 26, 2012.

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  1. kytro360

    kytro360 Power Member

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    Hi, yesterday I finished making my first real sales page video for an upcoming launch I am going to do :)

    I made the presentation myself, and got the voice over on Fiverr. The whole thing took less than 2 hours.


    Here is the unlisted Youtube link to it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiXEpsHa8qs

    What do you think?

    P.S: The audio and presentation in certain parts are off by a few seconds, please ignore that :p
     
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  2. steelballs

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    The voiceover is excellent in fact it makes the whole package very professional

    Well Done:cool:
     
  3. Eliaz

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    Its boring and uncreative, make it more pleasant to watch. My advice would be to create a new one, as videos can make a really good impression. Make it more fun and interesting. Just my thoughts
     
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    The sound quality was reasonably good.
    However the video was too simple and not very "interesting". You should try making it more eye catching.
     
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    kytro360 Power Member

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    I tried making it as close as possible to one of those videos in those "guru" launches. Should I add more images?
     
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    any discount for your BHW brothers? :D
     
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    Voice sounds really professional, the slides could be a bit more intuitive. Looks like a really simple powerpoint. The voice and video are off a bit, could sync better.
     
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    He is right, i could always help u out with the video, PM me if you are interested.
     
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    Great voice over, I would be more creative and maybe have better graphics
     
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    Should I add music, transitions, more images? What can I do to make it more professional?
     
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    I just checked out the page, looks really good. I think it will be succesful you just need to change your video, audio is good.
     
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    Look at this video: h**p://blamads.com/
     
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    Re the comments in the post to date everybody is different what some like others dislike for me the only point that concerned me was it was a little too long and not enough color and action in the video

    But I would not chuck that away it will work for some folks maybe you need 2 or 3 and you rotate them and see which converts best
     
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    The video is very informative and clear. However, the text needs little work. It should be more presentable in terms of the appearance. Other than that it's job well done.
     
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    Does anyone know where I can get a video done for less than $30 bucks preferably? I paid someone before to make me a video and I didnt like how it came out
     
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    Check this dude out here on BHW he is a straight shooter and knows his biz he charged 30 bucks over a year ago - but check him out it costs nothing to ask
    showbizvet
    http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/members/18990-showbizvet.html
     
  17. Heatz

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    The voice-over makes it look so freaking professional. Congrats on that, amazing value for Fiverr. Now I'll really consider looking for those kind of voice overs for a couple of my videos.

    And about the video creation, sorry, can't help you right now. I personally make my own videos (but I'm not selling that kind of services right now, don't have time).

    If I find some service of value video creation, I'll update here.

    Anyway, congrats on the video (especially for investing in the voice-over part).
     
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    It's pretty good ... well, a little bit boring but quality stuff nontheless. Just put it on your page and see how it works. If your stuff isn't converting you can tweak it on the go. A little bit of background music wold be nice - just make sure it's not too loud.
     
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    Thanks!

    Yeah I was gonna do the voiceover but Im 15 and I prob would of stumble, stuttered and messed up lol. Good thing I found that guy :)