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What do you think of my new musical score/instrumental? Let me know what you think... :)

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by munaworks, Dec 3, 2010.

  1. munaworks

    munaworks Registered Member

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UHyPCcwpNCI

    So what do you honestly think?
    BTW... It was completely done by me, so I am not taking credit for someone elses work lol :D

    EDIT: if you like, reward my efforts by giving me an upvote on reddit on this link: http://www.reddit.com/r/Music/new/
    titled - You will love this original musical score by me! It's called Fly Orchestra. It's sort of Orchestra + Hip Hop. Please tell me what you think.
     
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  2. ginbeam

    ginbeam Junior Member

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    My first thought? This would fit in an old school nintendo game. Yaaa know,
    like RIGHT after you defeat a bad guy and the 'mission music' is over -you're in
    the next room; maybe some translucent clouds floating around you ... you're
    just about to open the treasure, or meet the princess on an airship ... or hell,
    maybe there's some dancin' trees and little 'blob' people waving hi and stuff
    cheering for you. Then you go and get a snack and a drink before the next
    level, so this song will play ... over ...and over... til you get back because you
    neglected to put out the trash and clean the yard so you get all side-tracked ...

    ... brings me back :Dlol
     
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  3. GreenGoblin

    GreenGoblin BANNED BANNED

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    1. Takes way to long to transition, a A&R at a Record label would skip it after the first 10 seconds.

    2. It's not mixed properly

    3. The sounds u used don't compliment each other, there random

    4. The beat drags " I don't know if you ment to do that"

    5. It's terrible


    I will say, overtime u will improve naturally ..You need to learn how to play the piano to better yourself, and the bass guitar so you can add real baselines in your production.
     
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  4. BENNY8877

    BENNY8877 Supreme Member

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    That beat is extremely irritating, not too bad, keep coming up with new stuff.

    Good luck
     
  5. aeLED

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    No... Sorry but its not good. Try another one ;)
     
  6. math182

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    It's really good man!.............................wait... no it's not
     
  7. mland

    mland Newbie

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    Dude, you captured his song perfectly!
     
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    timothyreuscher Newbie

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    Needs a lot of work.
     
  9. munaworks

    munaworks Registered Member

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    Thanks for the constructive criticism I do appreciate it...
    Will continue improving my skills till perfection :)
     
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