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What about the rate of this writer,one of my best writers

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by augustwu, Aug 13, 2019 at 3:53 AM.

  1. augustwu

    augustwu Power Member

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    Anyone interested in help me check the rate of this writer
    If score is 10,what about this writer




    Different Ornaments in a Warm and Romantic Style

    There is no doubt that almost everyone has his bedroom. When talking about the bedrooms or the houses, I have a question to ask young girls: what kinds of decoration styles do your bedrooms or house have? Do you like a lovely and sweet style? Today, I will introduce these products to you. And I hope that you will like it.

    For many young girls, Plush dolls are attractive. As you can see in the picture, can you see its expression with a warm smile? With its PP cotton filling material and plush classification of Arctic velvet spray, this cloud pillow is soft, cute and durable. Besides, it is easy to clean when it is dirty.

    It is suitable for growing children because it can be a good playmate. Simultaneously, your child can hug a soft toy when asleep. You can also put it on the sofa for decoration.
    Here is the link to this product:

    Next, this Nordic bowknot ceramic vase is 7cm in width and 11.5cm in height. Do you like it? With its interesting shape, textures and warm colour, it is appeal to many customers. How about plugging in some flowers? Certainly, it is unique and beautiful. You can choose white, pink, light gray, and green according to your personal preference. Why not have a try?

    Here is the link to this product:

    At the moment, you have a vase now, and the flowers are indispensable parts of the vase. What kinds of flowers do you like best? How about these dried flowers? Due to its material, it is not easy to be withered so that many people prefer this kind of adorable flowers.

    There are many colours for you to choose: white, green, red, rose red, purple, royal blue, yellow, pink, blue andorange, and certainly different colours have different expression effects. What I can say is that all colours are attractive and beautiful. Besides, you can make good use of these giant star flowers and the above vase to decorate the house in a warm and romantic style. These flowers can be put it on many other occasions not only at home.
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    How about these angel ornaments? Angel is a symbol of purity and kindness.

    These angel ornaments are made of high quality environmentally friendly resin material and hand-painted and colored. Moreover, the surface is sprayed with sequins to make it more shine. How lovely these angel ornaments are! So you can put it everywhere you like.
    Here is the link to this product:

    In the end, I am pleased to share this ornament with you. It is creative and attractive. It is called the dream catcher. Because of its lower price and fine quality, it is one of the best selling products.
    It is said that the Indians use it to catch beautiful dreams while letting the nightmare disappear with the morning sun. They believe that they are full of all kinds of dreams in the night, and only the dream catcher can filter the dream to let them have beautiful dreams. With its Hand-knitted and national style design, it can give you special visual enjoyment. Come on!Just hang it on the wall of your bedroom, it can be used in decorating and brightening your life.

    Here is the link to this product:

    Come on! Try to use these ornaments to decorate your house and light up your life.
     
  2. ContentExpert

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    After a brief scan I can tell two things:
    • This isn't a Native US speaker/writer
    • This isn't money-site quality content
    Personally, I give this a 3.5/10 rating and would estimate the worth of this level of quality to be at the $1 per 100-word rate.

    In my opinion, it's an unusable article, especially since the focus is to sell a product (and this is not conversion-ready content).

    It needs to be rewritten entirely.
     
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    Did a quick Grammarly check, Few grammars mistake and need edits and its good to go.
     
  4. augustwu

    augustwu Power Member

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    Thank you, this is one of my best writer which is chosen from 1000 english students,I give them 1.98$ 500 words and I put the content in my blog of money site
    I ask them to write content with Grammarly
     
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    Where's this English speaker located?
     
  6. augustwu

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    Local Chinese students from top colleges ,she passed our content writer test and I hired her.The pass rate is around 3%
     
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    Send me this test, I'd like to take it.
     
  8. augustwu

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    Just ask they write one blog about product in my site, 300 words without grammatical errors ,allow one or two spell errors
    And my proofreader check them,give a score if score is more than 6 will pass.
     
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    Yah, it is very awkward. It may be grammatically correct but there is no flow to the language.
    Blogs aren't written in a tone that you would find in a textbook but one you would find in casual to the semi-professional conversation.
    One example is contractions. The author "doesn't" use any. So instead of does not, I used doesn't. More comfortable. Lot's of other nuances with the english language that only a native speaker or very expensive VA would know.
     
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    What about this writer?


    Item: Funny Cartoon Couple Pig Case



    Dear Case Lovers,



    I know, I know, one of our hardest choice we have to make in life is

    “Which case I’ m going to choose for my phone?”,

    especially when we just bought a new phone, or the old one seems so normal.

    Well, Good News:

    Our high-quality phone cases offer you multiple choices at a rock-bottom price. No matter what model your iPhone is, from iPhone 5 to the latest iPhone XS, you will always find a suitable case for your own iPhone. More than that, these two well-matched cases also allow you to decide whether you want to share them with your loved ones or take turns to use them according to your mood.

    Selected as one of our top selling products, these cases are not only thin and light, but also quite unique in design. Don’t you think? The black background of the case could match with any color of your phone, and won’t show the dirt at all. They will, of course, protect your phones from abrasion, scratches and fingerprints.

    As you can see, there are two cute little piggies imprinted on the back, which certainly will make you laugh just by looking at them. As a customer said: “I’ll keep buying as long as there is a case for my next phone.” Besides, it’s said that pigs bring wealth and fortune to people around them. That’s why these cute cases are perfect gifts for birthdays or other occasions.



    Here is the link to this product
     
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    The language is much better in this one than the last. Maybe 7 of 10. I think the negative points on this one are for some awkward sentence placement. The topics jump from sentence to sentence without much flow or transition. Sounds quickly put together without actually thinking about what is best to say. I'd advise this writer to write something longer with some structure to force them to slow down and organize their thoughts.
     
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    $1.98 per 500 words? and they are from top colleges?
     
  13. augustwu

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    Yes, filter by 3% pass rate ,others have too many grammatical errors
    Worth or not?
     
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    What about this one?she wrote much content on my money site

    The Japanese Fashion Leather textured stiletto has the latest ladies' footwear designs. It is made of the artificial PU and has open toe design. The heel is designed to an appropriate height, reducing the pain of wearing high heels. Also, It is a pair of slip-resistant shoes because of the material of the heels. The fashionable and super high heels are stylish and beautiful, whose elegant and detailed heel makes women look more luxurious. And it is the back zipper style that is pretty popular this year. As for the sizes, we have prepared six sizes to meet the different requirements of the female. There are two colors, black and white. The black one goes well with all kinds of clothes and it is suitable for most occasions. The white one is elegant and it is an ideal choice for daily life. Preferences vary from person to person, and you could make a choice.



    The Japanese Fashion Leather textured stiletto has lots of advantages. It is made of high-quality leather. The leather is soft and it is comfortable to wear. It is breathable and has the characteristic of wear resistance. Don' worry, the pair of shoes is suitable for most people. What I want to stress is the cheap price. Under good care, this pair of shoes could be worn for many years.

    We hope to offer high-quality shoes as well as the sweet service.
     
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    Question: If you posted your article on BHW and then on your blog, wouldn’t it count as plagiarism on your website?
     
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    Must be a sample, i hope so:p
     
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    The content is too dull and boring. And obviously not written by someone with a strong command of English. Word choices are quite poor and there are several grammatical errors.