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Want to take a break and read a creepy short story? Could use feedback / reviews!

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Erik, Jan 8, 2013.

  1. Erik

    Erik Regular Member

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    Hey BHW!

    I haven't been active for some time due to attending school, however, I used to share a few of my stories in the lounge here. Well, I just finished up on one called "I Know What They Are"

    It's about a young women who walks through skid row to get to work each morning. Things begin to happen when she meets a homeless lady wearing a labcoat, and she's holding a cardboard sign that says I KNOW WHAT THEY ARE.

    Anyways, if you guys would like to check it out, it's FREE to share under the Creative Commons, you can download a PDF or ePub from the site http://stealthfiction.com/completed-works/short-stories/i-know-what-they-are/

    (Also available on Kindle, GoodReads, and smashwords, if you prefer those locations.)

    I hope you enjoy the story, and remember, feedback or a review is extremely helpful.
     
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    Erik Regular Member

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    Aww come on, not even one "This sucks!" ?

    :-D
     
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    astronaut23 Junior Member

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    Hi, I just found your thread. I`m going to read the story now and then tell you what I think. I`m no expert, but I like reading :)

    EDIT: The story was great :) I really liked it. The sub-titles were a bit distracting though. If I were you, I`d go with dates instead (so it would look like a diary).
     
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