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Cold email can be a powerful outbound tool—if you do it right.
But here’s the thing: most people don’t.
Here are the biggest mistakes I see people making in their cold email campaigns:
This is where most people miss the mark.
Stop apologizing for emailing. No one cares.
And don't start by talking about who you are or what your business does.
The only thing that matters to your prospect is this: what can you do for them?
Make that your opening sentence.
If you want your cold email to stand a chance, you need social proof, fast.
Lead with a one- or two-sentence case study showing who you've helped and what results you delivered.
Two common mistakes here:
In the first email, I skip the CTA entirely. Instead, focus on answering these key questions:
But here’s the thing: most people don’t.
Here are the biggest mistakes I see people making in their cold email campaigns:
The Opening Sentence
This is where most people miss the mark.
Stop apologizing for emailing. No one cares.
And don't start by talking about who you are or what your business does.
The only thing that matters to your prospect is this: what can you do for them?
Make that your opening sentence.
Where’s the Proof?
If you want your cold email to stand a chance, you need social proof, fast.
Lead with a one- or two-sentence case study showing who you've helped and what results you delivered.
Two common mistakes here:
- First, your results should be tied to a cost or timeline—ideally both.
- Second, ditch the percentages. No one cares if you grew traffic by 9,900% if it was from 2 to 200 visits over a year.
Use metrics that matter: dollars, leads, or tangible outcomes that are hard to exaggerate.
The CTA
Most cold emails fail because they end with an immediate call to action—“Let’s set up a meeting,” for example—and that’s exactly how they end up in the trash.In the first email, I skip the CTA entirely. Instead, focus on answering these key questions:
- What can you do for the prospect?
- Why should they believe you?
- How will you deliver results for them?
To Sum Up:
- Start with what you can do for them.
- Include a quick case study tied to real results.
- Skip the CTA—let your signature do the work.