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Thank You Letter Sample!

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by spydj, Apr 30, 2009.

  1. spydj

    spydj Registered Member

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    Hello Guys,

    i am not quite sure if the right section for my question, but i guess so...

    I´d realy need help from one of the us guys here. I am trying to write a very professional thank you letter for "job applicants", but my english just isnt good enough for it :-/ Thats whhat i have right now:

    Code:
    [B][SIZE=2]Thank You for applying at "Example"![/SIZE][/B]
    
    
    [FONT=Arial]Due a high amount of applicants, we have decided that a preselection will be made. Therefore we have joined hands with example.com in order to find the best applicant.[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial]Please register at xxxxxx.com, create a profil and upload your resume.[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial]We will only accept resumes uploaded on example.com[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial]
    [/FONT]
    Sincerely,
    [FONT=Arial]Peter Hammilton[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial]example.com[/FONT]
    
    As you can see its realy bad, but i hope you get my idea: I´d like to tell them, that due the high amount of applicants, they must upload their resumes a certain site (my cpa offer).

    Could any1 of you guys quickly rewrite this letter for me that it sounds a bit more professional? I´d realy appreciate it!

    Thanks :)
     
  2. Sanitarium

    Sanitarium Regular Member

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    I guess making love to your eyes since you're read
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    In your mind.
    Seems ok, but you're missing a 'to' and an 'e'
     
  3. Knoxgates

    Knoxgates Supreme Member

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    or you may also start like "Due to huge amount of applications"
     
  4. cskgsquad

    cskgsquad Registered Member

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    Code:
    Thank You for applying at Example!
    
    Due to a high number of applicants, we have decided to partner with example.com in order to help speed up the selection process.
    
    Please register at xxxxxx.com, create a profile, and upload your resume. We will only accept and respond to resumes uploaded on example.com.
    
    Thank you for your understanding.
    
    Sincerely,
    Peter Hammilton
    example.com
    
    It's nothing super professional but a little better than what you had. Feel free to add more or do what you like to it.

    Maybe instead of "Due to a high number" you can say...

    Due to an extremely large number...

    Due to a large number...

    I'm not really sure the exact emphasis your trying to give off but you get the idea.
     
    Last edited: Apr 30, 2009
  5. spydj

    spydj Registered Member

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    thank you guys!