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Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by rpkrocks, Apr 12, 2016.

  1. rpkrocks

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    I have made few changes to my website and just wanted to know what you guys think.


    Any suggestions would be helpful.


    Site link is: rpk.rocks


    Thank you
    Rpkrocks
     
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    There is a mistake in the first sentence of your subheadline.
     
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    Thank you.

    Corrected.
     
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    I was talking about "out of the blues". "out of the blue" is the expression; "out of the blues" would mean they are writing the articles out of sadness. Honestly, there are many other basic errors as well - like, "we" isn't capitalized after the period in the contact box... - but I kinda stopped there. Best of luck
     
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    Thanks again.

    Yes, It's not completely done. I'm currently making changes.
     
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    I have been reading over your site for a little while now and there is a tonne of English errors which will instantly put anyone serious buying content off. If I was you I would hire a professional proof reader to read over and make changes.
     
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    Thank you for your reply.

    I've corrected a lot of them.
     
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    The site design needs some improvement. From the top to the bottom it just looks like a draft mode.

    The headline needs to be "We provide affordable [content]". Complete the whole sentence rather than using a word rotation and assume people will sit through 1 minute staring at the animation.

    Links to inner pages not clickable.

    Review image looks out of place. You would be better off not using actual image but just a placeholder and their name. People won't bother to check on it.

    If your target is people from bhw, this front page is practically useless because we rather go straight to the form to order.

    If your target is people from outside of bhw, this page is also unnecessary because they rather see a sample of articles.

    Basically, just get straight to the point instead of trying to impress clients with the UI/UX. That's if you're selling web design. Now you're selling content.
     
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