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[Suggest] Headline and Desc.

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Thuwacker, Feb 13, 2012.

  1. Thuwacker

    Thuwacker Registered Member

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    I'm opening up a massage therapy business later this year for students and those with learning disabilities and trying to come up with a decent Headline and Description. Here is what I've got so far:

    Title: Massage Dundee: Giving the care you 'knead'
    Desc.: Ease Away the Stresses of Your Day With A Swedish Massage at Massage Dundee

    Does any one have any other tips/advice on how to make it more attention grabbing?

    Cheers,
    Thuwacker
     
  2. jazzc

    jazzc Moderator Staff Member Moderator Jr. VIP

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    Moved to the Lounge and slightly edited the title :)
     
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