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Seduction411 needs your help! PLEASE give feedback

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by jimmyxsx, Nov 14, 2009.

  1. jimmyxsx

    jimmyxsx Newbie

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    My website
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     [URL="http://seduction411.com/"]http://seduction411.com[/URL]
    can use any and all feedback to help make it successful. I have owned the domain for 8 years and have not done anything with it until lately. I have it setup where members have to do four simple things to have a FREE membership. 1) Register 2) Refer a friend 3) Submit some content. 4) Sign up for a free offer of which they have 5 to choose from (they are porn). After which they would be paid $5 and every person they refer that becomes a contributing member, they would get another $5. Does that sound good to have access to free downloads on this seduction niche? Getting paid to do what you would do on a normal, daily basis?

    I have had 236 visitors over the last 2 months, 48 registrations but no one has completed the whole process. Can someone please tell me what I am doing wrong and what I can do to get people to complete the process... so my community members and I can build it up and we can all make some money.
    I have done some marketing in the form of a guide
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     [URL]http://www.docstoc.com/docs/15677223/Make-money-giving-away-free-seduction-community-memberships--seduction411_com[/URL]
    . That has not done anything either. I am in desperate need of someone helping me figure out what to do to "close the deal" and build the community.
    I was considering inputing a must complete offer at final step (like ************** survey thing) but members are not even doing the other two to get to that step.

    Thank you everyone in advance for any assistance you can give me.


    MODERATOR- if this is the wrong place, please let me know. NEWBIE does not want to get banned on first post. thanks.
     
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  2. Shine

    Shine BANNED BANNED

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    man that is such an ugly website, revamp it for starters. I didnt even bother reading anything on it, it hurt my eyes too much.
     
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  3. electric

    electric Junior Member Premium Member

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    I would have to agree. The website looks way outdated, like it could be from 2000. The banner has to be remade, and you should definitely go with a Web 2.0 design, a CMS, or Wordpress, and get a custom design made. There's so much to fix with this website!
     
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  4. g111k

    g111k Regular Member

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    LOL where do I sign your guest book? :D
     
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  5. SpamHat

    SpamHat Junior Member Premium Member

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    As you've only got 414 pages in Google - most of them dupes - all of them crap - I would wipe the fucker and start fresh with WordPress.

    Pick a theme, get an autoposter, slap on some links and you're away.
     
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  6. mercdrew

    mercdrew Newbie

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    wow i thought geocities shut down
    dude look at this site, hell look at facebook get some ideas
     
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  7. Lex Leto

    Lex Leto BANNED BANNED

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    Holy shit. Take that thing down. Tell you what, Ill get started on making a banner for you, for free. How's that sound?
     
  8. fatbaldbloke

    fatbaldbloke Registered Member

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    It looks web 1.0. The red and black theme is good in principle, but tidy it up a lot. And use a font that works well on the web (arial or verdarna etc).

    The pinstrip background hurts my eyes (that's not just a turn of phrase, it actually hurts me to focus on it).

    I found the join link, but it's too small. I believe there is a standard for the positioning of the join/login option (there is for most things in website design) maybe top right of the page?

    Your copy isn't the worst I've ever seen, but it's got typos and grammatical errors. PM me if you want me to write copy for you.

    On the join form, the country default is Afghanistan. Not a huge point, but make it default to US (or wherever your target market is) if possible. U is near the bottom and scrolling is annoying.

    The comments box is OK, but if I was joining I wouldn't know if I was supposed to write in it, what I should write and whether I would be rejected if I didn't write etc.

    I can't get any further through the form because the email box is greyed out and I can't enter an email address, so I can't progress (I'm using firefox)

    I'm no expert and I'm not trying to demean your hard work (it obviously took you a long time to put all that together) but you did ask! Good luck with the site.
     
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  9. angelas111

    angelas111 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    i thought i went back in time to 1996!!!
     
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  10. jimmyxsx

    jimmyxsx Newbie

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    Any help would be greatly appreciated!!!
     
  11. jimmyxsx

    jimmyxsx Newbie

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    Thanks everybody for your honest insight. I did have it like that from a while back... I just recently got a chance to work on it once again. I have made a few changes and have more to do. Thanks again everyone.
     
  12. g111k

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    I noticed the changes you started to make... word of advice, instead of patching it up, wipe it clean and start over with a nice CMS... it will save you lots of time and headache
     
  13. LV John

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    I second that. Use wordpress for a cms. Find a nice theme, change the header and spend your time marketing and driving traffic.
     
  14. fatbaldbloke

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    It's improving dude! It's still a bit dark for me to read though. Maybe use a similar font, font colour and size to this forum.

    Just one more thing though, and you can take this or leave it - the work "sexcess" makes me want to hurl. Yes, it's going to be a load of hawny dawgs who make you your money with this site, but if you say "success with women" believe me, everyone will know exactely which sort of success you are referring to!