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Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by Hamstamasta, Dec 21, 2010.

  1. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    Can Someone please rate this sale page. It's my first ever one and i really want to knw how i can improve it. Thanks :)


    (world wide web) (fullstop) topgear (fullstop) (co)

    God that took effort :p
     
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  2. true3000

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    is this it?

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    http://topgear.co/
     
  3. RuiGomes

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    The header is not really that well designed.
    The text itself is good enough.
    I think that you should place a buy now button just below the first time you mention the $9 review price.
     
  4. ``Yousef

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    I'm not trying to offend you, but that sales page is pretty bad. The text is all over the place, you center like 40 lines of different coloured and sized text at the start. The banner header doesn't look nice - I'm going to do you a favour and make you one for free on photoshop now.

    As for the content, I didn't read it, I'll let someone else judge that.

    EDIT: Here's your link; http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/3884/bhwguy.png

    It's not great by any stretch, but it should suffice.
     
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  5. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    lol I suck at sales pages. wud anyone reccommend a software to semi automate it?? oh and thnks Yousef for the banner!!!

    edit: I'll thnk u both tomorow once I get off my phone: p
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  6. lewi

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    topgear is a UK television program that is very very popular. I wouldn't be surprised if they try and take that domain name off you very soon.

    Lewi
     
  7. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    Before you start making conclusions please look at the facts:

    topgear.co.uk is owned by a completely seperate car parts company, have they had their domain stolen? No.

    Secondly, if the BBC were to even attempt to take my domain it would end very badly for them (ie. expensive in more than one way)

    Please research your arguments before stating them on this forum.
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  8. lewi

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    I wasn't arguing with you at all! I was just making a point and im glad you have done the research. This is not my niche... not my domain and none of my business.. i was simply pointing it out to you incase you had not noticed!

    Lewi
     
  9. Kickflip

    Kickflip BANNED BANNED

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    Wow. Are you seriously that gangster that you get fired up and ready to sue everyone and apparently hurt them "in more than one way" when someone mentions a completely legit point of consideration?

    Anyone searching for "Top Gear" is looking for a car related website. They are not searching for Facebook money making schemes. The page is not very nice. I love making money, but I did not enjoy visiting your page.
     
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  10. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    Lol I agree bt as long as I keep it out of the sight of the search engines and not try to compete with them then it shud be fine. I am going to put more time into that site once I actually get proper traffic flowing to it but until then I'll say itz in alpha stage.
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  11. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    also this is merely an experimt to see whether I can make any money from the method that a Bhw has published to do with facebook and fan pages
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  12. Kickflip

    Kickflip BANNED BANNED

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    Just wondering how you will find your customers? Buying ads? Emailing? Craigslist?
     
  13. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    essentially u scrape emails from facebook (
    thousands) add thm as frnds and then once u get like 5k create fan page and invite all friends. then post relevant status updates fr about 10 days then ask fans to invite their friends and if fanpage is good it shud go viral. and then obvs promote products etc.
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  14. Kickflip

    Kickflip BANNED BANNED

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    But are you planning to market your money making ebook thing to average facebook users? If you could easily make something go viral, wouldn't it be better to promote something that converts much better, with a much broader appeal?

    The bounce rate for something like that is like 99.999999%. Throw up a picture of Justin Bieber and claim its "uncensored pictures" for completing a CPA gateway and I have to assume you will make much more money.
     
  15. Hamstamasta

    Hamstamasta Regular Member

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    potentially yes, but I see this as an experiment and not a full scale venture.
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