Sales Copy Needs Polishing So It's Easier To Read And Looks Better

Hi,

I have a sales page with sales letter and targetted traffic and so on but it isn't converting.

According to a few friends I asked it is too much text and needs improvement so it's easier to read and so on.

One suggestion is to put text inside good looking boxes and so on.

If you are creative and have ideas on improvement please do let me know.

So looking for someone to do this simple polishing work, let me know what you have in mind and how much you are charging for your services.

Page is in wordpress.

I got a few PM's I replied to you all still waiting for some kind of reply.