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Sales Copy for your Money Site - Review Site - Landing Page - BST Sales Thread

Discussion in 'Content / Copywriting' started by IamNRE, Apr 2, 2013.

  1. IamNRE

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    Let’s face it, if your website’s content isn’t selling, your customers aren’t buying.

    Poor quality web content is the #1 reason websites fail. Perhaps you’re just skating by or your sales have dropped dramatically in the past few weeks. How does your conversion rate look? Better yet, how does your website look?

    While you’re saving money by buying that content for pennies on the dollar, you’re actually costing your company more in the long run – you’re costing yourself customers. People don’t buy from websites that use poor grammar, inappropriate language or ineffective content. Customers buy and follow websites that have:

    · High-impact, addictive content – if they can’t stop reading, you’ve got them!
    · Well placed and suggestive calls-to-action
    · Real, human-generated content – no auto spins or computer-made articles!
    · Quality links

    This doesn’t just limit to website owners – if you’re selling a service or even a product, you need effective sales copy too! Let’s face it; no one is going to purchase your eBook or even buy your new software or SEO services if your sales copy is less than compelling. You’re competing against big brands with huge budgets, which means your sales copy needs to be twice as effective if you plan on selling. The good news is, you can sell your products and compete against the Fortune 500’s and even Fortune 1000’s!

    The Importance of Effective Sales Copy
    Most sales copy pages lack four things: attention, interest, detail and action. When the reader is on your page, do they know what you want from them? Do they know what they will get for using your service or buying your products? If you can’t answer the basic questions, then neither can your customer.

    Great sales copy uses the “so what” strategy and that is our core for creating high-quality sales copy that captivates your audience. We write a benefit then we ask “so what?” and keep going! We get all of those negativities and questions out of your customer’s mind and answer any of the “what ifs” that keep them from buying. It’s as if we’re reading their mind, but really it is just effective sales copy.

    It doesn’t matter what you’re selling or what service you’re offering. If your reader isn’t impressed, they won’t convert into a customer. Bottom line.

    Why Some Companies Fail
    Most companies fail at writing effective sales copy simply because they don’t understand customers. They don’t research the products or your company’s target market, which means they deliver irrelevant, boring content for your ideal customer.

    To save money, some companies will hire writers from overseas. These non-English speaking writers may produce cost-effective work, but they don’t know anything about English mannerisms, language or what attracts an English-speaking reader to a product or service.

    So What Makes Us Special?
    We still offer cost-effective, high-quality sales copy, but we have added benefits that the other guys just can’t compare to:

    · We research you and your target market so that you get relevant sales copy that actually attracts and converts your ideal customer!
    · We only use native English speaking and reading writers. That means your content will make sense, flow appropriately and actually enhance your readers’ experience!
    · We don’t spin your content. Each sales copy piece is 100% unique and created by an effective sales copy writer!
    · We offer you strict adherence to your website guidelines. Have keywords you need used? Not a problem!
    · We offer UNLIMITED revisions until you’re 100% satisfied with your sales copy!

    Are You Ready to Boost Your Conversions?
    We’ve helped hundreds of customers just like you turn an ineffective website into a money-earning machine overnight. High-quality sales copy is what drives real profits. Take this client for example:

    His website was barely earning $200 per week with his affiliate marketing plan. His sales copy was boring and had no effective call-to-action. Customers read, but didn’t know where to go. We revamped his sales copy and made it attention-grabbing and effective. In just a few days his site went from $200 per week to $800 per week!

    We know you’re frustrated with your site, but it’s not your fault. Let our professional sales copy writers turn your site into a captivating sales page. With our turn-around time guarantee and unlimited revisions, you’ll get high-quality, tailor-made content that drives results home!

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  2. WizGizmo

    WizGizmo Super Moderator Staff Member Premium Member

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    I reviewed a couple of examples of IamNRE's sales letters
    and I was quite impressed with the quality. Very clean,
    comprehensive sales copy, good composition, word usage,
    punctuation, grammar and spelling. If you are looking
    for sales letters/ad copy for your website, BST Sales
    thread,s etc., then I suggest you give IamNRE's service
    a try . . . You won't be disappointed.

    Best of luck with your sales IamNRE! :)

    Cheers! - "Wiz"

    NOTE TO ALL: Please do not ask IamNRE for review copies.
    He will make an announcement if and when he wishes to give
    out any review copies or offer any discounted specials.

    - Thank You -
     
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  3. ankh.

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    Seems pricey, but that's taking into account the quality that most are used to on here. I'll be watching to see what others think.

    Do you have any examples/samples of previous work?
     
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  4. meathead1234

    meathead1234 Moderator Staff Member Moderator Premium Member

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    Edit: messaged someone to edit for you.
     
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  5. HostStage

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    IamNRE was kind enough to provide a free review copy and i'm trully impressed by the output.

    This is a unique service, i haven't seen on BHW yet and it would bring an outstanding value for all of you who are looking to optimize your sales thread, or your website.

    Quality is the word here.

    As most of you may know already, i run a web hosting company and finding a quality writer for such a technical market is nearly impossible so when it comes to optimize a sales pitch, i haven't even considered it.

    And yet, i received a copy 100% accurate technical wise, and with an excellent reflection of our web hosting policy and our communication strategies. Grammar / typo is also perfect.


    Such service isn't here to fill a blank space in adding words after words but it is made to optimize your conversions and i'm sure that after implementing it, i'll see a significant difference in the overall conversion.


    Thank you IamNRE !
     
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  6. Exaalion

    Exaalion Regular Member

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    I would have considered buying if you didn't make this error in a pitch to sell CONTENT.

    " if your website's content isn't selling, you're customers aren't buying."


     
  7. Duffers5000

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    IamNRE's Team put together a sales letter for me.
    They were able to reduce a longwinded pitch into catchy main points.

    The whole flow of the letter was funneled towards getting people to opt in to a service. I Havent launched the service yet but I know it will convert at a very high rate.

    I think it goes without saying that Grammar and Punctuation etc was all perfect.

    If you have a service or offer to promote, quality sales driven copy is the difference between All views and intermittent conversions , and an offer that gets people clicking and signing up. If you have the offer then great copy is an upgrade you cant do without.

    I highly recommend this service and hope its very successful for you IamNRE.
     
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  8. IamNRE

    IamNRE Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    You can check out some samples on our website; www.moneysitecontent.com/samples

    Our prices are very competitive. We are offering web copy/sales copy. Most people pay $300-$5000 for a good copy (like those you see on Click Bank products), this is not your normal web content or articles.


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  9. ankh.

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    I checked out the site. Your sales copy here says $50 per package and the site says $30. I'm used to getting a better deal in a BHW thread than available to the public, not paying an extra $20 premium. :p

    I realize this may be another typo, but you may want to think about correcting it one place or the other. Good luck.
     
  10. IamNRE

    IamNRE Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Hi Idiot Savant aka ankh, it's not a typo. I am planning on offering a couple of discounted review copies..... but I'm busy sorting out some PMs and have not gotten to writing the offer/post.

    Thanks anyways for your interest.

    All the best.
     
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  11. IamNRE

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    thanks for the wonderful reviews!!!!!!!!!!!

    30% discount for the next 5 buyers!

     
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  12. therage

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    Do you only write about the discovery stage of the market or can you write on the multiple progression stages of the market? Your current sales copy and samples are great for markets that are emerging, but what about competitive markets? You have no samples for that style of copy. I am actually looking to outsource a bulk of my copy writing, but I will need more convincing or samples to see if it is something I would use or not.
     
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  13. IamNRE

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    Thanks for your question! We don't have any examples to show you, but I am 100% confident that we can take on the different angle/progression stage of the market that you've specifically mentioned. My examples are commissioned by our clients and they have been successful. We can show you what we can do for you with an order for one page and revisions till you are happy. With indepth research on the topic and your pointers, my expert copywriters can really do a great job on this particular area.

    If you have any example & perhaps competitor links to similar articles, it will help us know better what you want.

    Let me know and we can get started on that today.

    Kind Regards John
     
  14. balsagoth007

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    Ordered $70 of content. Let's see what we will get.
    Thanks IamNRE
     
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  15. Jukey1992

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    I am in the process of creating an ebook, and I will require sales copy for the landing page .. Do you do smaller packages?

    I read the samples, and the quality is fantastic, but for a landing page, I think it needs to be a little shorter, and more 'to the point'.

    If I was to tell you exactly what my ebook is about, could you write a shorter sales copy? Like the stuff you see on Clickbank products.
     
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  16. IamNRE

    IamNRE Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Yes we can, when you order from MoneySiteContent.com you will have the opportunity to split up your 500 words up to 5 times. So you could, if you wanted to, get 5 x 100 word short copies for $50.


    Thank you!

    2 More Spots available at $35 - Order Now and Save 30%!

    Thanks
     
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    Just ordered $70 content.

    Looking forward to it...
     
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    i will take discount copy
     
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  19. Seo Lover

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    I got a sales letter written by IamNRE's team

    Just a single word "Superb"

    I got it written in ~ 48 hours -- Fast Turnaround

    Quality is superb , no errors and its good to attract more visitors and converting them in clients

    About service , i know IamNRE from about ~1.5 years and he is a great guy and he sells real legit services

    And about content his team is very smart and good in work .

    Keep up the good work bro
     
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    Just got my 500 words sales page content and i can say that it looks very professional and i'm definitely going to order more from them..
    Thanks!
     
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