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Review of a simple landing page

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by Vonotna, Sep 9, 2015.

  1. Vonotna

    Vonotna Junior Member

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    This is just an example. I want you to tell me the if I can expect any results with creating a lot of landing pages like this one and promoting them.
    This is in no way me advertising this site simple becouse I can't gain from this anything posting it here, I just want to see what you guys think about it.
    Moderators if you see this as advertisment please delete the post and I am deeply sorry :)




     
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  2. Hawkster

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    Its awful, difficult to read, poorly designed.
     
  3. Vonotna

    Vonotna Junior Member

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    I know that, it is made in 2 minutes and can be made automatically with a bot. My question is, can you get conversions with this kind of landing pages in big numbers.
     
  4. Digitalist

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    As it stands your ads won't load before the visitors hit back or close the tab. I would have dipped without scrolling so I wouldn't have even known there was Clickbank link down the page...

    Sure, it's automated but garbage in=garbage out. Look at a few sites you tend to spend time on, work on an aesthetic that draws you in.
     
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  5. Raven13

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    How about making 10% of this big number with better landing pages that convert? I think you better put some effort into that.
     
  6. AlexIv

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    You will not get a good number of conversions with that landing page, work on that, the key to sell is have a great and trustful landing page.
     
  7. shizaru

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    The landing page is hard to read, maybe you can hire a good landing page designer.
     
  8. Paper-Boy

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    I can make a better LP in less than a minute using leadpages. :p

    I very much doubt you could get any conversions with this. Font kills my eyes tbh.
     
  9. GoldenWarrior

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    Not professional landing pages mate. But 1 thing you must need to avoid. You can't post direct link in BHW. Better you will edit your thread. And make your mind professional.
    Thanks
     
  10. UptonGoodwin

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    Posting links on BHW to your normal sites is just poor decision making. You let google connect your site to BHW and you give curious scammers access to any whois info you have availabe as well.
     
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    The choice of font / color is awful. Best way to improve that is just copy on the big ones. If they make tons of money out of it, they must have looked into details.
     
  13. Vonotna

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    yup i never planed leaving the link for longer then a day, thank u all.
     
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    Not very professional and clean, just do some research on google and here on bhw. You will find out how to improve it! Best of luck ;)