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Review Needed of my new site. + Promo Tips

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by thefallendevelopment, Mar 13, 2009.

  1. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    Okay....so i guess my first post got screwed up somehow. But here it is again. :D

    I just opened up my site and it's based on this method
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    http://www.blackhatworld.com/blackhat-seo/making-money/47775-make-500-day-giving-people-free-websites-offline-marketing.html
    I need some input on the site, layout and whatnot.

    The site i just opened is
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    http://www.eezywebs.com
    Any advice about it would be greatly appreciated.
     
  2. webkumar

    webkumar Registered Member

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    wow your site's layout is good enough and i really like it. the top navigation menu looks not much catchy enough i feel so. other than this you site is totally good.
     
  3. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    Thanks! I'll work on the nav later on today when i have time. Takin the weekend off before i start really promoting.

    Anyone else have anything to add about the site? Need all the advice and critiques i can get.
     
  4. xxkixx

    xxkixx Newbie

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    The video definitely needs to be a bit more upbeat and maybe have a quiet but motivational music behind it, sorry, but the voice on the video does not match with the site.

    Everything else is very nice :D
     
  5. charltones

    charltones Newbie

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    Spelling / typo in banner #3 & #4 on the home page:
    "We'll begin to assemble YOUR website"
    "Start promoting YOUR new website to all of your business contacts AND colleagues"
    also in the portfolio it should be "non-disclosure"
     
  6. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    THanks for the input guys!

    Will be fixing this asap.

    Video will probably be taken off anyways, since i can probably use adobe to do that screen capture and explain everything that way.

    Thanks again!
     
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    keinehabe Supreme Member

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    it's nice looking but the portfolio don't need to be there ( since you don't have to prove your creative powers - you aren't selling nothing practically ! ) ads on local papers can work nicely :)
     
  8. thefallendevelopment

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    Thanks! But you don't think the potential clients would care to see a portfolio?

    And LOL after i actually noticed my grammar mistakes, thanks for pointing it out charltones, very much appreciated!
     
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    site looks really good. i would get someone more enthusiastic sounding to do the video tho - no offence, thats how i'd sound to be honest but that is why id get some of peppy fucker to do it for me - or maybe try some of that voice over software you can get where you just type in and it speaks? I want to try this method to and im jealous of your site, well done :)
    i was thinking about the promo and i think amongst other things having a sticker in your back window or on your car would get noticed by a lot of local businesses, or maybe pay a taxi driver to put a sticker on his car.. average taxi does about 500-700 miles per week 99% locally too.
     
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  10. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    Thanks spaceinvader!

    LOL yea i'll have that video remade, i know its pretty annoying. :)

    And having a taxi ride with a sticker is an excellent idea!
     
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    Kontra Newbie

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    I am not going to lie, I like your site. Simple, good color schemes, nice use of flash. Good job. I might even use your services. Thanks.
     
  12. dexterfly

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    I have seen the same method somewhere in the forum and this is an incredible idea.
    I'm creating a training on how to create websites and I might apply this technique there as well.

    thanks
     
  13. dayne

    dayne Newbie

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    simple and neat
    nice layout ..
    :drinking2
     
  14. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    Thanks!

    Hopefully it'll be a hit once i start promoting it.

    And go for it dexterfly, this is an absolute goldmine. Especially if you upsell SEO and other services.
     
  15. glew

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    Very clean site, very well done. If I were you I would keep the samples up. If i'm a business owner this is about time, money and exposure and i would not waste my time with anything that didn't show me some sort of samples. You wouldn't have someone build you a house without seeing what they could do, free or not. It's no different than IM, make them feel confident in your service.
    Just my 2 cents.
     
  16. the zul

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    WOW..UR SERVICE FOR FREE??
    that's nice ;)

    but i think ur site need a logo....it'd looks more good and nice
     
  17. thefallendevelopment

    thefallendevelopment Junior Member

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    Thanks glew!

    I do feel the same way about having some sort of portfolio up there. So i left it up after debating after a while.

    @ the zul, thanks for your input. I'll eventually get a logo, but right now kinda keepin the site lookin web 2.0ish for some reason lol.

    And yes, i build the site for free...all it costs is the monthly hosting fee.

    Thanks again for all input from everyone!