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review my translation to english please

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by azooz3001, May 20, 2020 at 6:23 AM.

  1. azooz3001

    azooz3001 Regular Member

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    Hello,

    my native language is arabic, and there are alot of arabic websites that deliver well searched content.
    and i have this idea to translate the content from arabic to english ..

    So i just wrote a half of an article as an example of my translation .. Please, tell me what do you think?
    should i start right away and build a website with this type of translation?


    the article:

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    Kinds of people

    Each person is distinguished by a personality that is distinguished from other people, and if the individual wanted to communicate effectively with others, it would be good to see books or articles that display the personality patterns in a scientific or according to studies in the field of psychology, and for examples of personal patterns that he classified Psychology such as: narcissistic people, degenerate people, etc.
    -In this article we will mention all the kinds of people and how to deal with them.

    = Quiet and simple
    -they trust others quickly.
    -They trust themselves.
    -They like to hear compliments and compliments from others.
    - Good-hearted.
    -Their lives are random and disorganized.
    - They Love fun and entertainment.
    -They always feel safe.
    -They do not like to talk about their personal lives such as: emotional relationships, work and others.
    - easy to communicate with.


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    Thats it, looking for your opinion ..
     
  2. Sweely

    Sweely Power Member

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    It's good enough, I think. I've seen websites with worse content rank really high in some niches.

    Just buy your domain, hosting and you should be good to go.

    You can always have someone that's a native English speaker proofread your content in the future.
     
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  3. win993

    win993 Regular Member

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    Looks okay to me. I've seen much worse, and from native english speakers!
     
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  4. dandan594594

    dandan594594 Senior Member

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    OK, for tier 1, but no where near good enough for money site. Especially in the medical niche.
     
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  5. Luke Gage

    Luke Gage Newbie

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    Try to figure out a way to break into short sentences? I lost it in the middle. Not recommended for Tier 1. 2 & 3 Yup! Looks great!
     
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  6. azooz3001

    azooz3001 Regular Member

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    Thank you guys for the review, how about this one? I tried to improve my self a little

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    Article:
    since the appearance of the human , on the ground, He uses animals and plants for everything he needs, he still hunts animals for meat and Skins, and cuts forests to build homes and roads on the land, also uproots the plant for its food, and digs the earth for its minerals.


    The animals will not remain on this earth if we keep hunting them, the nature will not remain anything if we exploit it without thinking. So we have to save the nature in order to ensure its survival, as long as there is life on the ground.


    Taking care of nature means finding a balance between human needs and ensuring the survival of wildlife. Fortunately, there is a increasing between people who believe in saving wildlife, and not just enjoy seeing it,because it provides food and oxygen.