Discussion in 'Making Money' started by jmdawson, Nov 13, 2010.
Looking for as much feed back as possible
The colors are a bit much.
My eyes didn't know where to look and I lost interest before I even knew what the site was about.
The yellow is rank m8 ..
Its quite frankly distracting from the message your trying to portray..
I dont think theres enough info on the product your selling only some crappy youtube videos that are KINDA related... which is like meh !!
The layout of the site is a little xfactor looking its very dated looking.
U need to jazz it up really. Its like something from the 80.s
I think Personally i would rejig the layout and the colour and im sure u that wouldnt turn people off of what message your trying to get across.
Where is the "actual textual content"? The whole site is one big image!
yeah, its okay - sorry you wont get a lot of positives from BHW in terms of site desighs etc
If the background is changed to off-white or black, then the "image" would look good. I think it's a good design (except for the background color) for a landing page. Now I wonder, How would you change some of the text if you need to (because it is just an image...)?
As others said, I would change the BG to white or a white gradient or something that looks cleaner rather then distracting.
i would swith the yellow while or other lighter color.
I agree, the color is a little bright and distracting. Also, there's no content. How will you rank for keywords and you have no text on the site? In my opinion it needs to be redesigned. There is too much going on, too many distractions. Get rid of the one large pic and add some content, add individual pics if you want and content in between, spread it out a little so it won't be as jumbled.
sorry, its not opening here.. anything wrong?
I have a feeling he has to 'clone' the mothersite, etc since that page is pulled in via a frame.
If that's the case he probably can't change it anyway if he wanted to.
HINT: You can do better on your own.
Check out the keywords:
<META name="description" content="Financial Destination"><META name="keywords" content="vonumental, mlm, cell phones, multilevel marketing, 3x9 , forced matrix, home based business, reggie gay, zoom, php, phpi, people helping people, light year, my wireless, buzzirk, mywirelessrep, opportunity, residual, fdi, financial destination">
If you CAN use your own copy then CHANGE it ASAP and if nothing else recreate the same page with text, etc and DIFFERENT colors LOL!
HTH .... :cool2:
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change the yellow background..it hurts really..
whats with the cars blowing,flipping? kinda over the top imo.
Yellow is a horrible color. It steals all focus from the text and main content.
When I finally decided to read it the color was still there hurting my eyes, so x`d it out before I knw what is was about (I did notice two cars crashing though).
Well as everyone else says, the yellow is taking away my first attention when i visited. And some more content, to convince the visitor
change the background to white..its more pleasing to the eyes.
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