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Review my site please 1 day before launch

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by VinnyChase, Dec 8, 2009.

  1. VinnyChase

    VinnyChase Registered Member

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    Ok 1:00 am here, night before the launch and as promised, here is my site. http://thecommissionpayload.com This is my last push to get it back up in the top 10. Since only 3 people here actually gave me advice and I am so far down the rankings now I see no harm of turning loose the name. I am still making post and for the first time, bought about 15 articles that should be coming in shortly, that I will post on the site as well.

    I know many people here are in this one and many people have noticed that this one was mine. So as this is a training site and my very 1st, please point out what i have been doing wrong so i will not make the same mistakes if I do decide to do another.

    I will try to stay up 3 days straight and try to get my 1 sell goal. I have some adderall left so staying up should not be a problem. After this I have more reasons to go back to the doctor lol. Numb fingers and out of drugs. Dam I guess that is all part of old age, turning 35 is starting to take its toll i guess.

    well anyway check out my site and point out everything that is wrong. I really would like to know what I have done wrong. Did I not work hard enough? Did I do to much to fast? My site looks like crap? Not enough back links? Google just plainly hates me? message me if you do not want to post but I need learn my mistakes, it might ease my pain and frustration.

    http://thecommissionpayload.com

    Let me know if some of you have trouble viewing the site as from what i found older versions of fire-fox and internet explorer looks all screwed up, but it shows most of my traffic that is coming is using updated firefox. I could not find a way to make it 100% in all browsers.
     
  2. multimedia

    multimedia Power Member

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    Dude, your site is very fast and i have no Bad Remarks for it. I personally like your site's Design.

    Good luck with sales ;)
     
  3. moose2b

    moose2b Newbie

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    Your video doesnt look centered in the div to me
     
  4. tooeasymoney

    tooeasymoney Newbie

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    In my sight, your site will get one backlink from this forums...
     
  5. VinnyChase

    VinnyChase Registered Member

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    I am showing 14 spot again right now, Just got a message saying #4 but i see 14 here are the pictures, Read my post about this also a few days ago ron in uk sent me a picture showing 1 and 2 spot i sent him a picture showing 12 or 13. I drove to family members house about 25 miles away and shows me the same 12 or so. this was yesterday today right now i see 14, I have 3 computers in front of me right bow all saying 14. I restarted the other 2 and no change.

    pictures and info here

    http://yfrog.com/3114nowj
    http://yfrog.com/jncompleteoverviewj
     
  6. polymath

    polymath Registered Member

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    just one comment:
    the Niche profit packs part where you ask for opt-in emails, I'd prefer you put some instructions like "submit your email to receive the limited edition book about..." or something like that...it looks vague and unclear to the average user what to do with it...people might not know what they are "instant downloading"
    Hope this helps:)
    Peace man:)
     
  7. VinnyChase

    VinnyChase Registered Member

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    Thanks polymath I had that up before but thought it made the opt-in box to big. I do not really like this box to begin with and been working on trying to replace it but having trouble. I will add the message right away.
     
  8. amonster

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    great layout and color scheme. graphics quality is all that is lacking
     
  9. greyhatdude

    greyhatdude Regular Member

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    That's exactly what I was going to say. Some of the images look like they have been "squeezed" into the boxes they are in, they're a little fuzzy, not sharp, and have some speckling. You need to do some resizing and need to zoom in and clean up the "speckles" or random dots in what should be flat color fields. Don't know what else to call it besides "speckling" or "speckles".
     
  10. sokol

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    "sign up" must be emphasized and its quality improved, isn't this youre getting the profit :)
     
  11. tuesday10

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    I like the site it loads pretty quickly. My only criticism would be that it's very busy. I think you should make the focus a bit narrower for the visitor when they get there.

    Aside from that, rocking site.

    Good luck.